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Written: October 26, 2023 _____________________________________ At the bottom of a boundless cosmic sea. An excellent, universal command decree Idiosyncratic anthems permeate the air. Unfathomable eternal marvels fit beyond dare. In a gothic universe with endless space. Quantum supernovae withdraw a trace. A sanctuary to tune in and heal your spirit. Hence, a realm of wonders of flair inhibits Misleading me to a spot where I will never roam The lure of an era that once held me as home I chased a comet's tail through the rodent hole. Within an ancient oak so weak, on a witch pole An owl whispered to me, "To whit, to wooed." Bound, swollen, and sad, I lay in an aged feud. Clouds gave the sky an ethereal, vibrant blue. Rays that are breathtaking in their hidden hue   A secluded elixir, a dreamscape to tackle Love, hate, and despise pursuant a rackle. Evasion and criticism both refresh the soul. A vital refuge is where worries are whole. I'm famished for such a haven of peacefulness. At once, the ground coated me with evilness. Amid a sanctuary of four-leafed clovers. In the last scale, field flowers and elves rollers   Where the paths bend and descend. A straight jacket greeted me at the trend. Man, shy yet potent, strong and protective. Tough and rude, but distraught and attentive.

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Date: 10/27/2023 2:43:00 PM
Very unique work you have penned in this one. Kind of scary so it must be for Halloween. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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