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A Message To My Daughter

Fledge! Leave the Child behind. Take wing and soar To the woman you Are meant to be. Build strength in the turbulence called life. I am still watching, but like a Young bird someday you will fly alone. You have all you need for your solo flight.

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Matthew Anish

Date: 1/1/2018 9:25:00 PM

Touching poem here! They leave the nest eventually! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2017 1:00:00 PM

I hope she gets your message.. Everyone has to grow uo one day..

Sheila Haskins

Date: 12/28/2017 12:25:00 PM

I think these are wise words. The message is concise, and clear. I like the concept, the solo flight of a bird, the first word Fledge, gives it the drama it needs to keep the reader's interest.

Ann Roske
Date: 12/28/2017 12:31:00 PM

Thanks for the great feed back!

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/28/2017 12:24:00 PM

Take wing, young bird. Lovely write Ann...