A Message To My Daughter

Fledge!
Leave the 
Child behind.
Take wing and soar
To the woman you
Are meant to be.  Build strength 
in the turbulence called life.
I am still watching, but like a
Young bird someday you will fly alone.
You have all you need for your solo flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anish Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Touching poem here! They leave the nest eventually! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
One Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 1:00 PM
I hope she gets your message.. Everyone has to grow uo one day..
Haskins Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 12:25 PM
I think these are wise words. The message is concise, and clear. I like the concept, the solo flight of a bird, the first word Fledge, gives it the drama it needs to keep the reader's interest.
Roske Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Thanks for the great feed back!
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 12:24 PM
Take wing, young bird. Lovely write Ann...
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace