A Message From the Sea

I set the stage for tropical romance;
among my rocks have sirens’ songs been sung.
Yet some who dare to traverse my expanse
into the briny depths of me are flung.

Inconstant as the sun that comes and goes,
I’m calm as windless day or still of night;
then furious as hurricanes that blow.
You cannot know my mind nor guess my might.

By ancients I was feared and deified,
and still two thirds of all the earth I rule!
Let humans learn the ebb of every tide,
but he who disrespects me is a fool.

The plight of humankind will be its worst
when I and land for sins of man are cursed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kauffman Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 4:03 PM
The master of the sonnet strikes again! Perfectly summed up in your last two lines, Andrea! This is choke full of vivid imagery! Congratulations on your HM!
Wolf Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:08 PM
The mysteries of the great blue. This sonnet has inspired me to have another crack at one. And I thank you for that. /|\
Warlov Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 9:24 PM
The true work of the true poet. Poet as prophet. Shame on the rest of us for not exploding this generation's malaise. We should scream at our eyes. Your humble servant.
Walker Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Great sonnet.
K. Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Hi sweetie-- ook, I am trying to condition myself to MOVE, and just had to pass by at least one of your writes before I go, and I'm glad I chose this one... water sure can be a mystery but what I enjoyed about your sonnet here is the sense of foreboding that you also give--- you give an important message here and a reminder as well of what could happen. I think you did a wonderful job of personifying the sea here. I see you got congrats here, and fittingly so... congrats, sweetie pie!
Babcock Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Lovely Andrea and like the way you add personification --he who disrespects me is a fool--nicely done. love phyl
Mac Donald Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 11:46 AM
I'd read, or heard that 95% of the ocean is unknown. By the time some new species can be discovered, it will have had the chance of being altered or destroyed by plastics and chemicals.:( Love poetry about the water, and especially this gem, Andrea! Hugs, Mikki
Lawless Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Ah, Andrea, the personification of the sea in a Sonnet. Beautifully written with a sharp pointed final couplet. Thanks for participating in the contest.
May Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Great write and win Andrea....Congrats
Krampe Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Love the personification of the sea.
Scars Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Super Sonnet Andrea, congratulations...
Devnath  Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Excellent personification of sea that gives a great message to humans. Wonderfully done. Best of luck and 7 my lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Haight Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 9:29 AM
A lovely Sonnet as a personification of the sea, a mighty force indeed, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:21 PM
A great poem x I am terrified of the sea it really scares me because of its great power x I know what it can do x well written x
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:25 AM
I live surrounded by the sea Andrea - love your powerful message and great personification in your fabulous sonnet:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Terrific piece Andrea. Hope all is well with you...hugs
Chircop Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Youd message echoes the power of the sea through this amazing sonnet. You are one of my faves. when it comes.to sonnets sweet lady.Outstanding post.
Van Der Merwe Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 7:15 AM
Great write Andrea - very powerful message Mark
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:33 AM
Wow Andrea, you have your muse working overtime with this magnificent piece! I love the way you have personalized the actions of the sea. If for a contest, this will be hard to beat! 7 ; )
Daniel Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Great message, Andrea:) Each line reveals so much about the sea. Lovely:)
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 1:11 AM
Nice to see you firing up on all cylinders with a nice, fresh crisp Sonnet, Andrea. A lovely piece. Viv x
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