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A Mermaid's Tail

Davy Jones was clearly immoral When he ruled all sex must be oral But one mermaid's tail Excited a whale And his fluke just shattered the coral!

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/7/2018 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/7/2018 8:57:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa, Susan! Aloha! Rico

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/6/2018 12:06:00 AM

A fun Limerick Rico! Congratulations on your top win! : )

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/7/2018 8:57:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/5/2018 6:51:00 AM

LOL! Congrats, Rico!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/5/2018 3:16:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico

John Lawless

Date: 8/4/2018 10:13:00 PM

Well done Rico, congrats on placing so well.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/5/2018 3:17:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico

Bartholomew Williams

Date: 8/4/2018 9:21:00 PM

Rico, congratulations on your strong second-place win in this fun contest!! All my very best to you and yours! :) Bartholomew

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/4/2018 7:44:00 PM

funny and clever - loved it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2018 5:21:00 PM

hahaha. Love this. Congrats to you, Rico! Hope you got a girl to give a ring size for!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/4/2018 2:35:00 PM

Rico, I have been seeing the imags of the fluke shattering the coral ever since you entered this poem in the contest. Great work! Congratulations on your second-place win. Please send me a Soup mail with an address where I can send your prize and let me know if you want a gift for yourself or for a lady. Thanks for the laughs! Carolyn