A Mermaid's Tail

Davy Jones was clearly immoral
When he ruled all sex must be oral
But one mermaid's tail
Excited a whale
And his fluke just shattered the coral!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Leffanta Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Mahalo nui loa, Susan! Aloha! Rico
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:06 AM
A fun Limerick Rico! Congratulations on your top win! : )
Leffanta Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:51 AM
LOL! Congrats, Rico!
Leffanta Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Lawless Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Well done Rico, congrats on placing so well.
Leffanta Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Rico, congratulations on your strong second-place win in this fun contest!! All my very best to you and yours! :) Bartholomew
Waters Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:44 PM
funny and clever - loved it!
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:21 PM
hahaha. Love this. Congrats to you, Rico! Hope you got a girl to give a ring size for!!
Devonshire Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Rico, I have been seeing the imags of the fluke shattering the coral ever since you entered this poem in the contest. Great work! Congratulations on your second-place win. Please send me a Soup mail with an address where I can send your prize and let me know if you want a gift for yourself or for a lady. Thanks for the laughs! Carolyn
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