A Mermaid's Tail --Tale--

Shards of gilded light, so iridescent,
cascading over your perfect shoulders.
Your sensuous form, curled 'to a crescent,
nestled amongst the rocks and the boulders.

You stretch languidly and seek to unfurl,
'fore slowly brushing your locks of pure gold.
Graceful strokes with a comb formed out of pearl,
'tis so entrancing: a sight to behold.

The euphonous lilt of your silvern voice,
carries 'cross the waves and reaches mine ear.
Upon hearing this, I have to rejoice,
a magnum opus, truly without peer.

These feelings of mine, no longer contained;
my passion rises and then carries forth.
"We must be together; it's preordained!
Forsake all others from this day henceforth!"

With a flick of your tail you disappear,
into those briny depths we cannot chart.
Vanished from all sight, I can't interfere;
left nary a trace, 'cept here in my heart.

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June 2014

For the "Mermaids" contest sponsored by Suzanne Delaney - Fifth Place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/12/2018 9:13:00 PM
I had a little extra time so came to search for a poem again and look what I found. One I never read! I absolutely love this one. I don't usually see a mermaid poem this well written, John. I am surprised to see this one got fifth place and not higher, though it was a long time ago and I can't even remember the other winners now!
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John Michaels
Date: 1/13/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thanks very much for the great comment, Andrea - and the encouragement about placement!! Kind regards, John.
Date: 11/18/2017 1:53:00 PM
Ohh John, what an enchanting and enticing write. I was captivated by your beautiful imagery and siren's call from start to finish. A wondrously expressed tale and congrats for your winning place in the contest - well deserved for this delectable write! Warmest regards always my talented friend!! ~Susan
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John Michaels
Date: 11/25/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Susan. Am so pleased this piece hit a chord with you!! Your lovely visits are always appreciated. Kind regards, John!
Date: 9/2/2014 10:43:00 AM
John, thank you for the reply...Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:25:00 PM
John, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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John Michaels
Date: 8/19/2014 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. Hope you liked it!
Date: 8/17/2014 9:07:00 PM
Apparently your not the first to fall for that siren of the deep. lol... Good job and a big congrats. Bg
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Date: 8/19/2014 1:53:00 PM
Thanks for the words of support. Hope you liked it.
Date: 8/17/2014 7:47:00 PM
Big congrats on your fine win!!!
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John Michaels
Date: 8/19/2014 12:58:00 PM
Thanks very much for the kind words!
Date: 6/5/2014 6:39:00 AM
This looks like a winner to me! Beautiful write - I can visualize your mermaid! Best wishes with the contest!
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John Michaels
Date: 6/5/2014 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much for the kind comments. I don't produce many rhyming poems, as I tend to write shorter forms, like Haiku and Nonet. Glad you enjoyed it!
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