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A Memory Rings

When silence sings A memory rings A heart springs And words wear wings ***** I compose my rhapsody Passionate and full of melody With shades of artistic unity Satiated with peaceful beauty ***** There’s a poem in your eyes Raw feelings of Nature ties And all the wonder it implies Your verses in my mind I eternize ***** Your hidden rainbows of the mind To every single hue I relate and bind A magic wave of wand, one of a kind A treasure of human nature is mined ***** Timeless streams of secrets Shall retain their mysteries And the sacred words of poets Shall go down in histories. Written on June 5th, 2022 Word prompts by Silent One : "When silence sings " "There’s a poem in your eyes " "Hidden rainbows of the mind " "Timeless streams of secrets "

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 3:42:00 PM

The prompts guided your mind to look deeply into your heart and soul, and words burst forth as, A Memory Rings. Well written with, my friend. The rhythm in each verse flows smoothly and offers us nuggets of awareness to feed upon. May we always be hungry for more. Smiles ~ Blessings, Besma. Bill

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/15/2023 3:06:00 PM

I truly bare my heart to words and have them spill my true feelings and thoughts.. every single word unveils a part of me.. You have a stunning poetic mind and a sensitive poetic heart.. dear Bill, I can’t thank you enough for showing a genuine care and giving value to my humble poetry.. God bless you. I am a teacher too, still teaching.. and the meaning of my name is Smile! Have a great time! Best regards.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2022 3:38:00 AM

Your reaction to these prompts has been truly inspired, dear Besma. Your "rhapsody" grows wings and delights the reader in its far-reaching flight. ~ Warm regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/25/2022 6:37:00 AM

My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings to you too, Paul.. I truly appreciate your honouring presence on my humble page.. and my apologies are sincere for being so late to respond to your so beautiful and lovely feedback! Thank you so much! God bless your beautiful soul.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/16/2022 3:27:00 AM

Wow, you are a fountain of inspiration with this one. Your soul rings true and your pen flows beautifully, Besma. Winning wishes, for a chosen poem and for a beautiful life for you xo

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/16/2022 1:16:00 PM

The honour and great delight are truly mine dear friend and poetess Rose! I'm so glad you enjoyed my humble words and found my poetry inspiring! You are so kind and amazingly beautiful! Thank you so much for your graceful presence! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Robertina B.

Date: 9/12/2022 5:29:00 AM

An absolute exquisite rhyme, dearest Besma.. Your amazing talent shines! You created a masterpiece , dear friend.. So breath taking I am in complete awe! This gem is going right into my faves! Many blessings to you!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/16/2022 1:13:00 PM

I'm deeply humbled by your kind feedback and praising words, dear Robertina.. You are of remarkable humility and beauty to spill such delight into my heart! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Valsa George

Date: 9/7/2022 9:44:00 AM

I felt like commenting on this poem once more, as I read it a second time, without remembering what I wrote on my first reading. This goes into my Fave.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/16/2022 1:11:00 PM

An immense honour and a great pleasure to always see you here and read your wonderful feedback and have your great support! Thank you so much dear friend Valsa! God bless you. Love and hugs.

Valsa George

Date: 9/7/2022 9:40:00 AM

So sweet dear Besma... the lyrical and musical beauty of this poem is incomparable. When words are aligned in the right order, in the right sense and in proper rhythm, it becomes poetry. If so your poem can be ranked as excellent poetry!Definitely your words have wings and they soar into dizzy heights. "I compose my rhapsody/ Passionate and full of melody/ With shades of artistic unity/ Satiated with peaceful beauty" . No one can ever dispute your claim. Sing dear friend, sing out of joy from your sweet heart!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/16/2022 1:09:00 PM

You overwhelm me with your beauty of soul, kindness and generosity dear friend and poetess Valsa.. Your honouring and rewarding presence are so highly appreciated and valued.. Your words of praise bring a lot of joy and satisfaction into my heart! Deeply humbled and grateful to you for all that you are doing to encourage and support my humble poetry.. Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/6/2022 10:49:00 AM

My dearest Besma, how happy a heart indulging in reminiscence and how beautiful the song of the singing soul recalling eyes filled with poetry and hidden rainbows of the mind as you connect with every feeling and hue of Nature and human nature, where treasures are mined.. How happy is your avid reader's poetic appetite to be nourished by the music of your beating heart and the layered shades of your soulful rainbow..? I would say that I am very happy indeed! My sweet poetry sister, your grand pen spills exquisite words with wings that soar ever higher in my heart's imagination where they flock in beauty to be cherished. Warmest wishes, love and hugs, you never fail to inspire me, sweet Besma.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/16/2022 1:04:00 PM

Blessed I am and ever grateful to have you dearest friend and soul sister Susan, an amazing Artist and a great poetess reading and relating to my humble poetry! So happy to receive wonderfully the echoe of my feelings and thoughts.. so thrilled to see and feel my humble words having a generous place into your heart and mind! The deep joy of reading your feedback and impressions exceeds the delight and pleasure of writing! Thank you so much for what you are giving of your beautiful soul and profound mind.. thank you so much for what you are adding to me sweet Susan! Stay always blessed and happy.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/6/2022 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful poetry as always Besma, from your gifted pen. I nearly missed this gem as I've been doing a lot of travelling this year. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/16/2022 12:55:00 PM

As always, Tom, you reward my humble poetry with your honouring visit and encouraging words.. thank you so much for your great support and kind feedback! Hope you are doing great! My deepest regards and blessings.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/5/2022 8:09:00 PM

This gem is as bright and gleaming as I knew it would be my dear friend. Verses rthat sing to this old poet's heart. And yes-- "" There’s a poem in your eyes Raw feelings of Nature ties And all the wonder it implies Your verses in my mind I eternize"" A fav,,, God bless...

Robert Lindley
Date: 9/5/2022 8:11:00 PM

A magnificent poem that stirs me to compose this night. When previously I thought only of going to sleep.May God bless, always, Robert

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/29/2022 10:45:00 AM

A magical aliveness you have described so eloquently dear Besma ! You are a gem who shines deeply. I have missed you and your deep-felt and mystical words, your heart and your soul. In gratitude to find this new poem. A gift ! Hugs and blessings to you my friend, Susan :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/30/2022 5:32:00 AM

Your magical presence rings in my soul and here I am leaving my mundane maze to embrace the delight of your beautiful feedback and respond to your wonderful call! Deeply humbled and so much grateful to you for your kind and generous words on my humble soul and words.. My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Timothy Ray

Date: 8/25/2022 5:11:00 AM

take a bow for excellent elegance....the audience is silent but only because you have left them breathless.....

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/30/2022 5:36:00 AM

And I run of words to render my deep joy and gratitude to you for such an amazing and heartwarming feedback! Thank you so much, Timothy for such a precious reward for my humble poetry! So much obliged to you.. I'm wordless! Looking forward to reading your gems! My deepest regards and blessings.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/23/2022 6:38:00 PM

Amazing enhancement on SO stanza, Besma, 'to every single hue,' all the lines so enchanting. So lovely the poetry.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/30/2022 5:41:00 AM

So lovely and honouring, both your presence and comment! I'm so happy to read your praising words to my humble poetry! Thank you so much, Harry! My deepest regards and blessings.

Mark Toney

Date: 8/20/2022 11:11:00 AM

From Silent One's exciting prompts to your beautifully written rhyme. "When silence sings ~ A memory rings ~ A heart springs ~ And words wear wings" There's a rhapsody, then poetry, followed by "rainbows of the mind", culminating in your mysteriously brilliant last stanza. It's so good to read you again, Besma! :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/23/2022 3:26:00 PM

It is so delightful to read such caring comment and receive such rewarding feedback! Thank you so much for your graceful presence and great support.. always an immense pleasure to see and read you, Mark.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/20/2022 6:59:00 AM

Beautiful weaving of melodious thoughts, Besma. Much enjoyed the tone and flow of your poem honoring poetic art. Keep flying my friend on wings of timeless inspiration.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/23/2022 3:22:00 PM

How beautiful and encouraging are your words dear Vijay! So much obliged to you for always being here honouring and supporting my humble poetry.. deeply grateful to you and blessed I am by your generosity.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Valsa George

Date: 8/20/2022 5:54:00 AM

So happy to see you after such a long gap dear sweet friend, Besma ! I truly missed your beautiful poems and comments . What a wonderful opening is the first stanza of your poem to what follows. The musical quality of your poems is unbeatable. Equally beautiful is the content. Your 'rhapsody is so passionate and full of melody'.... there is no doubt about it. Let us hope that our 'words shall go down Histories!' I see your 'words wearing wings'. Hope to read more of your poems, dear friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/23/2022 3:18:00 PM

A deep joy being here reading your so beautiful and heartwarming feedback and impressions on my humble poetry dearest friend Valsa.. I have missed your amazing poetry and your generous presence too.. Poetry is dwelling into my very soul.. always trying to find time to share with you such enlivening passion.. thank you so much for so rewarding and honouring visit! I highly appreciate your so kind words.. Looking forward to reading your beauties.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.