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A Memorable Breeze

A breeze came through the window and brushed across my face Bringing me thoughts of you, as time turned back without a trace For a moment, it felt like nothing changed and you were right here Connecting with me all over again, while erasing every single fear No longer was I alone in this world full of conflict and animosity With facts whirling through my brain, no answers, just curiosity What would you think and say to me now, I do not even know There is so much complexity in these times that continues to grow Just as quickly as the breeze came along to reach me, it went away As I stood in the path of memories it brought from long ago, today Heidi Sands 5/29/20

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DM Babbit

Date: 6/13/2020 12:57:00 PM

How many memories ride that breeze, washed away by rain, flowing to the seas, a dream quite grandiose is this poetry and prose.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2020 1:06:00 PM

Thank you for your input DM. I appreciate it. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/9/2020 9:40:00 AM

Heidi, This is one of life's mysteries to me. Why they come back in a breeze. All those sweet, spent memories. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2020 3:23:00 PM

Well for me they come often, but this day was with a breeze. Thank you for your visit and comment Richard :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/7/2020 3:05:00 AM

A wonderful poem Heidi - memories come and go , some last and linger longer , but others fly away with quickly with a breeze. Whoever you were thinking of has you in their heart and will always be with you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2020 6:56:00 AM

It is so nice to read your comment on this. Very nice to hear. Thank you , Jennifer :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/31/2020 6:42:00 AM

A touch of refreshment as memories kiss and say goodbye...Keep safe

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2020 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your kind comments. I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/30/2020 8:50:00 AM

"Just as quickly as the breeze came along it reach me, it went away" so true of memories brush against our skin. Well penned Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2020 9:38:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/30/2020 6:28:00 AM

Much pleasure to be amid nature--you said it well, Heidi, about the emotions that evoke the past and present in all its complexity.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2020 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice day :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/29/2020 6:07:00 PM

Really enjoyed and can relate to thin Heidi... Panagiota xoxo

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2020 6:17:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/29/2020 4:39:00 PM

Well written Heidi, memories surface from time to time of events and people and for a time you are back there. Hope you're well. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2020 4:44:00 PM

Thank you very much Tom. It is very true. I am ok, but dealing with blood vessel inflammation from my immune being in over drive and not back to myself. Still plodding forward. I hope you are well :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/29/2020 2:04:00 PM

"Wind in the Willows" is another example of sweeping through one's memory banks to dust off those long ago cells. Every time I hear Jo Stafford sing, "Oh how welcome thy voice!" ("Whispering Hope")I am instantly transported to my mother welcoming my father home from WWII when he jumped off the train, resurrecting simple pleasures unknown to modern generations! Well caught and scribed! Aloha! Rico

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2020 2:13:00 PM

Awesome. Thank you for your input Rico. I appreciate your comment :)