Eileen Manassian Poet Sonnet

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A Melody Divine- Hexsonnetta

A melody divine,
transposed from outer sphere
where angels hover near
comes down in metered time: 
a sweet delightful chime
so jubilant and clear.

The notes flow in my heart, 
and they assuage the pain.
Mellifluous refrain
of sweet poetic art, 
they make my healing start,
and bring in joy to reign.

On dulcet rhymes, I fly,
to claim poetic sky.

For Andrea Dietrich's HexSonnetta Contest
August 19, 2015

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Michael Tor September 29, 2015 at 8:27 PM Congratulations Eileen! Eileen Manassian September 30, 2015 at 10:07 PM I'm so sorry I'm late with my response to your post on my Hexonetta, Michael. Thanks! :)

Sara Kendrick September 28, 2015 at 3:26 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara Eileen Manassian September 30, 2015 at 10:08 PM Thank you for your visit to my Hexonetta, Sara. I really appreciate it.

Lycia Harding September 26, 2015 at 10:48 AM This is excellent, Eileen! So uplifting and etheral. Congrats on your celestial win, my Dear, I'm proud to share the winners circle with such a Poet as you! Eileen Manassian September 30, 2015 at 10:09 PM Thank you for your visit to my Hexonetta, Lycia. I'm a bit late in responding. So sorry. I appreciate your kind words. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 21, 2015 at 2:01 AM Wonderful write Eileen n yet another superb win! Big congrats!

Kp Nunez September 20, 2015 at 10:49 AM Back to congratulate you, Eileen! hugs! Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 2:14 PM Thanks for stopping by, Kim. It's much appreciated. Hugs

Bill Lindsay September 20, 2015 at 5:28 AM Rarely have I seen 59 words aligned so perfectly. Would that I had your talent. Big congrats. ;) Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 2:15 PM Thank you, Bill. :) You are very kind....Hugs

Justin Bordner September 19, 2015 at 10:03 PM You are a "melody divine" Eileen...J.A.B. Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 2:15 PM Thank you for making my heart sing, Eagle. :) Hugs

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2015 at 4:37 PM Eileen, the MESSAGE of yours was just perfect for this poetry form. and you said it all so beautifully, Just had to give a tie for top win. I had NO CLUE this was yours. Wow, I am glad that you finally got that win from me that you said at the blog you always wanted. congratulations. Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 2:16 PM :) I'm thrilled beyond belief, my dear. Honestly....Thanks ever so much. Hugs

Skat A September 19, 2015 at 4:19 PM Hi Eileen, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT* Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 2:16 PM Thank you, Skat. I'm very happy. :) Hugs

Paul Callus September 19, 2015 at 2:36 PM Big congratulations, Eileen!! I'm so happy for you attaining first place in this challenging contest. Indeed you have claimed poetic sky, both with the lovely content and with perfect meter:) Andrea is a fair judge...she favours the brave, the hard-working and the talented; you are one of them:) hugs // paul Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 2:17 PM Thank you ever so much, Paul. I can't tell you how happy this win makes me....honestly, I'm thrilled! :) I tried very very hard....Thanks for the lovely visit.

James Inman September 19, 2015 at 12:49 PM I would not want to be Andrea having to choose from the selection of poems that were written for this contest. This is wonderful Eileen. Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 2:18 PM I'm glad you liked this, James. You are right. It is very hard to be a sponsor. That's why I haven't hosted a contest yet....I appreciate the visit.

Sandra Haight September 19, 2015 at 12:41 PM Amazingly beautiful, Eileen. So worthy of your First Place win! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra Eileen Manassian September 19, 2015 at 12:44 PM Thank you! I'm so pleased that you liked it. I really worked hard on this one, Sandra. I know that Andrea is a tough cookie of a judge. :) Hugs

Faye Gibson September 19, 2015 at 12:19 PM This is beautiful, Eileen. Happy to share this placement with you. Congratulations. Eileen Manassian September 19, 2015 at 12:20 PM Thank you, Faye....So kind of you to visit. I'm thrilled that Andrea liked my piece. I've tried so hard to please her as a sponsor. I will be by to visit your poem soon, dear. Congrats!!! Hugs

Carrie Richards September 19, 2015 at 10:11 AM Just lovely, Eileen !! Congratulations! Eileen Manassian September 19, 2015 at 12:25 PM Thank you, Carrie. Your approval means a great deal to me. :)

CayCay Godwin September 19, 2015 at 10:07 AM Your poem is absolutely beautiful ... CayCay Eileen Manassian September 19, 2015 at 12:27 PM Thank you for your kind comment, CayCay. :) Will be by to visit you soon.

Jan Allison September 19, 2015 at 10:05 AM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Eileen :-) hugs Jan xx Eileen Manassian September 19, 2015 at 12:28 PM Thank you, sweetie....I'm so happy!!! Congrats to you too. Hugs

Jan Allison August 21, 2015 at 4:13 PM simply a poetic delight Eileen good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Richard D Seal August 19, 2015 at 6:42 PM Many poems have been written exalting the beauty and effect of poetry, this my little Desert Orchid, is right up there with the best I've ever read. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 11:55 PM Mr Seal....thanks ever so much. I miss the teasing and the banter. You are way too serious of late....Lighten up! :) Remember Agony Auntie??? Remember how incorrigible you were....I want that Mr Seal back! ;) Hugs

Charmaine Chircop August 19, 2015 at 6:20 PM Andrea loves the 'dulcet' word and I believe she s gonna love this Eileen. Your poetry is indeed music to my ears and it flows in my heart so beautifully. Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 11:57 PM :) Hello, soul sister. Always a joy to see your pretty face at one of my poems. I do hope Andrea likes it. I'm going to keep trying with her till I get that first place spot.....or die in the effort. Second place has been the closest. She challenges me. Love ya.

Sara Kendrick August 19, 2015 at 3:25 PM Genius creation..Way to go for the contest..Readslike a winner..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Eileen Manassian August 20, 2015 at 12:03 AM What sweet sweet comment, Sara. Thanks for the visit. I hope your issues with the computer get sorted out soon. Hugs

Jack Ellison August 19, 2015 at 12:36 PM Wonderful awesome write my dear Miss Boop! Well done... a winner for sure! Love, Kenny xxx Eileen Manassian August 20, 2015 at 12:04 AM :) Here's hoping, dear Kenny. I have read some sweet ones....Check out Paul Callus and Kim Merryman's HexSonnettas....Chances are slim for me! Hugs

Nudershada Cabanes August 19, 2015 at 10:33 AM Awesomely written Aileen. A 7!! good luck in the contest...hugs ~Nudershada Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 10:35 AM Thank you for your visit and well wishes. :)

Anu Nayak August 19, 2015 at 10:23 AM Dear Eileen, Adorable and awesome!7!! good luck for the contest...love, Anu:-) Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 10:25 AM Hey, sweetie! :) Thanks for the visit and the lovely post. You are always sweet. Hugs!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis August 19, 2015 at 9:53 AM Angelically melodic, indulging the soul! Good luck dear Eileen! A seven. Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 9:54 AM :) Thank you, my dear esteemed poet. You bring me joy. Hugs...kai filakia.

Richard Lamoureux August 19, 2015 at 9:50 AM I am unfamiliar with the form but I like the result and imagery in this piece Eileen. Hugs Rick. Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 9:54 AM :) Thanks, Richard. It took a whole lot out of me, but I do like a challenge. It is Andrea's own form! Isn't that amazing???? You have your own form....I did a form that Craig used as a contest prompt. Perhaps it's time I host a contest on the Eileenette. :) Hugs

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