A Mechanic's Love Poem

You can be my hubcap if you let me be your wheel. The love I have for somebody like you is real. I can give you plenty of loving. I aim to please. I will be your radiator if you will be my antifreeze. You are so attractive to my eye my dear. You’ve got my transmission shifting into high gear. There’s no need to wait four thousand miles for an oil change. A date with you and me is something I can easily arrange. I can give you a tune-up with a new set of spark plugs. You just have to be around to give me plenty of hugs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/21/2012 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Your Choice Once More" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 7:11:00 PM
LOL......Robert, there are so many good lines here, it should be illegal, but I'm glad it's not. "I will be your radiator if you will be my antifreeze.", what a wonderful line. I am jealous that I didn't think of it first. The entire poem is a gem, you should be proud. Hat's off to you, my friend, really good work. Congrats on making Brian's winners' list................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:53:00 PM
Romantic in a strange kind of way..Shows that passionate work can be written using what one knows...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I got a chuckle or two out of this one also..Don't know if it was intended or not..Congrats on your placement in Brian's contest..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2012 9:29:00 AM
congrats Robert on an HM for this extraordinary entry luv..
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Date: 2/20/2012 6:24:00 AM
Awww..shucks...this is so darn cute, Robert! It's like a cartoon! Excellent fun in this write. Gwendolen
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Date: 2/19/2012 8:13:00 PM
ROBERT.. CONGRATUALTIONS! ON ANOTHER wonderfuL win... ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:42:00 PM
robert, this is one of your best poems for me. Full of wit and cute humor. Congrats on the HM.
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Date: 2/19/2012 4:24:00 PM
Very clever Robert. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/29/2012 5:07:00 PM
this is WONDERFUL for Valentine's Day. It 's a great example of personification and very cute. Is it for the special one?
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Date: 1/28/2012 10:19:00 PM
Hi Robert, You gave me a really good laugh with this poem. I love your sense of humor. Seems you're easily pleased! :) God bless, Maureen
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Date: 1/28/2012 3:15:00 PM
Good one, Robert. I think there's a country song in there. hahahaLOL Really, i like this. It's cute. Love,Kim
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Date: 1/28/2012 2:41:00 PM
This one made me laugh, good write....George
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Date: 1/28/2012 2:27:00 PM
Way to go Robert, this is a wonderful write, I love it! My favorite line is, "...I will be your radiator if you will be my antifreeze..." that is an awesome line! Great Work!!
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