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A Matter of Form

After reading Connie Marcum Wong’s superb free verse poem she entered into Line Gauthier Free Verse vs structured Poetry Contest. It inspired me to go structured and write A sonnet, using as much of Connie’s poem as possible. First is Connie’s version, then my own. Eloquence of Election Expressions penned from soulful contemplation, Rather rhymed, in form, or in free verse style, May not decide my choice between the two. It is the sense of awe that is the draw... Awe that leaves one feeling so inspired, Tears well up in eyes and deep sighs follow. Poetry may rival the rising sun With wondrous colored shades from dark to light. Aquatic tunes in concert with moon's moods Enchant us with the music they impart. As love extolled in lover's lexicon Rather rhymed with iambic expertise, Or with angelic wings of free verse flight, I love them both, I could not choose just one. © Connie Marcum Wong 2019 A MATTER OF FORM Statements penned from soulful contemplation Rather rhymed, in form, or in free verse style, Decided not my choice of foundation It is the sense of awe that pens the guile. Awe that provokes one’s ardour to inspire While tears well in eyes and deep sighs follow, When to rhyme is to eclipse dawns sapphire Shades of dark to light, gifts from Apollo. Aquatic tunes in concert with moon's muse Enchant us with the music they impart, Lovers eulogize in poetry enthuse If one rhymed with an iambic Mozart. Or with angelic wings of free verse flight, Is to love them both side by side, so right. © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Date: 12/20/2019 2:35:00 PM
Both are excellent Harry.
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Date: 12/19/2019 8:46:00 PM
G'day Harry … two great sonnets on the one page. How lucky are us readers - thank you Harry - Lindsay
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Date: 12/13/2019 2:42:00 AM
The sonnet form is my favourite. You, unlike myself, have done it great justice. Btw, thank you for your comment on my poem. It inspired me to write again. The power of the pen
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Date: 12/6/2019 5:32:00 PM
That's why I enjoy being here on PS - other poets inspire one to be adventurous in trying new forms of poetry...and that is what creativity is all about! I enjoyed both sonnets, variations on a theme! Best wishes for the contest, to both of you..Warm regards, ~~Aqua M~~
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Date: 12/6/2019 7:06:00 AM
Very nice! I like the line...or with Angelic wings of free verse flight :)
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Date: 12/5/2019 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful inspired compilation. I love both versions. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/4/2019 3:06:00 PM
You were wonderfully inspired by dear Connie, Harry. Everyone writes according to the style they are most comfortable with, and as long as it moves us, it is poetry!
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Date: 12/3/2019 2:41:00 AM
I hope you will enter yours in Line's contest too Harry. I like your version better. Thank you for posting mine too. Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/2/2019 9:34:00 PM
Nicely done, Harry. I like what you did. Charlie
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Date: 12/2/2019 4:10:00 PM
A great reply to Connie's poem..
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Date: 12/2/2019 1:43:00 PM
- I love what you did here, Harry - Excellent ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2019 9:49:00 AM
This is great! I enjoyed it :)
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