A Man's Tale

A man’s tale 

With mind control there he was,
A man for sale…
Hearing the vocal sound from this wordsmith, 
A man in his own tale…
Currently, he was sitting and calling upon the earth.
Prior rumors about his love for the Queen.
Yet to come would be a bard, singing for Her Majesty-

A fool wrapped in a cowardly way.
Flowers and scars sat on his floor.
A torn heart, making its way out the door.
He caresses the image of her in his mind.
This man, this bard, sang a song for the blind.

Releasing a soft note, she turns towards the sun.
Forgetting the ferocious rage of the king.
The man kneels with the light flashing in his face.
He drinks with his eyes, one moment of glee.
His headlands under the moon's winter space.

Never again, will he spend his days thinking.
Never again-
 will he feel the shivers when calling upon the earth and her beauty. 
Never will he know, he was the tune that eased her thirst.

A man’s tale always ends under a woman’s spell. 

by;PD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Toil Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Hi Linda.I have been checking your page every day and there are no new posts.So now I go through your archives and I was drawn by your title. A beautiful write, dear Linda.And your last line, so powerful and so true! "A man's tale always end under a woman's spell".Yes, we cannot help it. We crave it.I humbly suggest you read my poem, "The Pick Up", in which I try to express this need men have to be under a woman's spell. Godspeed, Linda! I hope your writer's block is soon resolved. Hugs;) Ben
Gasun Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:32 AM
Hi, my dearest sis! Good a.m there! Beforehand, I want to say i'm so grateful & glad to read once again tonight this stunning masterpiece of yours. Always a pleasure, tonic and honor for me to read your stellar poetry. Thanks a lot! Big Hugs! Embracing it again & u. By the way, thank you soo much for my win in your contest.. I'm so glad you liked my entry & thanks a lot also for your inspiring comments on my experimented poem. I'm not sure if I did it right ;)) More hugs! lovem4evr,Leo
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 12:19 AM
I have read much of your work. You are a very prolific writer and your works inspire. Thanks for being you.
Mwau Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 3:08 AM
Wonderful piece, what else would give homage to such splendid tale, those words wade love with candid spells....don't i just love it!
Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Best case scenario both honor each other. Light & Love
Sadek Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 4:49 AM
amazing poem Linda! " A man’s tale always ends under a woman’s spell" woowwww i am speechless! keep writing :)
Buil Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 10:25 AM
So descriptive. I could imagine it all in my mind. Great poem! :D
Maverick Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 3:13 PM
Hmm..do you really think so P D??They always look sort'a innocent an all, well just goes to show i suppose L O L..' God bless Joe.."
Seal Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 7:17 PM
Now I know why I call you the Dark One lol, been looking for some confirmation and now I found it lol, another great poem from you. Take care, Regards Richard
Dunn Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 9:53 AM
Nice write very visually appealing great sense of feeling in the lines. Well written my friend.
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 9:26 AM
I really enjoyed this medieval-styled love tale. It wasn't overly romantic like others I've read and it had just the right amount of description to leave the reader curious as to the extent of their love. I'd say the last half of the poem was really something special... drinking with his eyes, one moment of glee... << golden line right there!
Scott Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 12:33 PM
stoped by again love this one read before wicked how are you davidscottxx
J.T. Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 3:58 PM
This one i find really interesting. I like it - JH
Bordner Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 2:14 PM
I see myself in this Poet PD. - a noble moral, a noble exit - you are supernatural my Sphinx - J.A.B. %
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January 23, 2013 at 7:49 PM
I think my head is somewhere in the moons winter space still, I just don't know where. I enjoyed this sad tale of love. I'm still looking through your poems just picking some random ones right now. I don't think I can comment on all of yours so quickly like you did mine. I want to thank you again for all your kind words.
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January 10, 2013 at 12:12 AM
now for better or worse.... there ne'er was a truer verse ,,,,,than this last ....that you did cast
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January 7, 2013 at 6:39 AM
Hi PD, First i want to thank you for your comments I am glad you liked my writing. I hope to post more if i get the inspiration, but after reading your comments i was inspired to write one for you this morning. I hope you like it. And can I be under your spell. I guess you already did. I enjoyed reading your poem. Happy new year. Love, Ali
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December 28, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Hi PD, I especially love the last line -- truer words ....
Veetil Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 7:20 AM
Brilliant write. Had missed it. Thank you for your wishes. Enjoy , and Merry Christmas. Love, Mehnaz.
Kearley Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 5:22 PM
So true...So true. :o)
Horsman Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 2:19 PM
there are some women who's spell i would love to be under, especially the writer of this wonderful saga....
Duncan Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 9:38 PM
nice words you got up there ;}
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December 10, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Soup Mail, my answer to your question.
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December 10, 2012 at 9:05 AM
I don't know how a man is kept for sale? May be, if under the women's spell. Hi! my sweet friend, enjoyed your jokes. Loved always, bl
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December 9, 2012 at 8:53 PM
I may not be for sale, but I do have a tale to tell. Soup Mail Linda
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