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A Man's Oil

She was not very pretty Her smile was somewhat witty And unhappy sitting still In the noon wet winter chill When night came, she wished to stay Nay said I, be still I pray But away she strolled hostile She'd enough of her false smile Her soul on canvas captured I took those thoughts discoloured On the journey of my life As a decayed deceased wife Mona Lisa Louvre

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/10/2010 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Seeyam,but the conditions of the contest require the work of art to be 'al fresco'.Paintings etc inside a museum/art gallery do not qualify.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:48:00 AM
This poem is about DaVinci & Mona Lisa.
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