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A Man's Oil

She was not very pretty
Her smile was somewhat witty
And unhappy sitting still
In the noon wet winter chill

When night came, she wished to stay
Nay said I, be still I pray
But away she strolled hostile
She'd enough of her false smile

Her soul on canvas captured 
I took those thoughts discoloured 
On the journey of my life
As a decayed deceased wife



Mona Lisa
Louvre

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/10/2010 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Seeyam,but the conditions of the contest require the work of art to be 'al fresco'.Paintings etc inside a museum/art gallery do not qualify.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:48:00 AM
This poem is about DaVinci & Mona Lisa.
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