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I’ve spent a lifetime; looking down this same old road And; all the memories that, upon me it has bestowed I watched the children play and grow, as some stayed There were others; who left, married, some led astray But the old brickwork of the streets remains the same The old colliery; its gates closed unemployed to shame As the skies though were clearer; in their lack of smog Spirits plummeting; as thoughts, to a better life befog As men got wearier; their sense of purpose in disarray Wives and mothers struggling; their men, without pay The days of a man breaking his back digging black gold Now all left dejected; their souls being, so cheaply sold Honest working men; their lives are driven to the drink In their attempt to drown their sorrows hoping to sink All weddings attended; all built now, on unsure ground A sense of dourness; of babies in their newborn sound Funerals mourned; to men gone, well, before their time As pennies given to prevent their kid's going into crime Nothing changes; nothing ever will, forsaken and forgot And I still stand here; still rooted, to this same old spot As idling time and, still looking down this same old road This legacy of shame and poverty that on me bestowed Indiana Shaw . . . -_- "I have used a small part of a picture I sketched from a photo of Hester coal mine, New Hartley, Northumberland, England, UK

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Date: 1/7/2020 12:22:00 PM
Enjoyed your verse Indiana, so many pits closed and cheaper coal imported, communities torn apart. I take it you are in the U. K. ? Tom
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 1/7/2020 5:58:00 PM
Brum - Colourful . . . : )
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 1/7/2020 5:11:00 PM
Most definitely but strangely a masculine female, so I can come up as male and female in my poems, but: never in-between . . . : )
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/7/2020 2:30:00 PM
From the detail in your verse I thought she can't be from the U. S, your name threw me lol. Evesham, Worcs. Although hail from B'ham.
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Date: 1/7/2020 12:32:00 PM
Northumberland, Tom, UK, The picture up is a small part of the single shaft Hester pit, New Hartley, Northumberland, sometimes known as the New Hartley pit disaster that in 1862 resulted in 204 deaths, the youngest being only 10, this disaster brought in the new design of double shaft mines.

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