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A Man of Few Words

Come out of the church To the open air With dancing sunbeams about the streets I told him to come, to come into sight He yelled back to me, “I’m allergic to the light.” I saw him swing on the bars Like an agile young boy His looks deceive him, his age does not suit him I said, “Come out, do not wait for the night.” He said, “I can’t, I’m allergic to the light.” Long knotted hair the length of his back Dressed in wool sweater and baggy brown slacks Covered in sand from a play in the park I tried to clean him up but he stayed in the dark The flash of a camera or the ray of electric He curls up into a ball, with nothing but fear So I said, “Face your fears, do not give into fright.” One last time he insisted, “I’m allergic to the light.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 9/20/2009 2:27:00 PM
Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/20/2009 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/19/2009 1:57:00 PM
I like the creative format and the conversation style of this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/17/2009 7:49:00 PM
Interesting write that fits right in with our current vampire obsession ... smile ... a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 9/17/2009 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations friend, on having your poem featured this week. Please keep writing. Great you! Adeleke
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Date: 9/15/2009 8:26:00 PM
H - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:36:00 AM
H, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:56:00 PM
nicely done, congrats on being a featured poet!!
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week H. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:56:00 AM
My belated congrats on making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:04:00 PM
Very interesting, creative write with great imagery here ... now its a "first round survivor" ... congratulations and good luck in the contest !!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals H. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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