A Man of Few Words

Come out of the church
			To the open air
					With dancing 
sunbeams about the streets
		I told him to come, to come into sight
			He yelled back to me, “I’m allergic to the light.”

I saw him swing on the bars
		Like an agile young boy
			                                     His looks deceive him, 
his age does not suit him
		I said, “Come out, do not wait for the night.”
			He said, “I can’t, I’m allergic to the light.”

	                                Long knotted hair the length of his back
            Dressed in wool sweater and baggy brown slacks
		Covered in sand from a play in the park
I tried to clean him up but he stayed in the dark

			The flash of a camera or the ray of electric
		He curls up into a ball, with nothing but fear
                 So I said, “Face your fears, do not give into fright.”

One last time he insisted, “I’m allergic to the light.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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I like the creative format and the conversation style of this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Interesting write that fits right in with our current vampire obsession ... smile ... a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!!
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Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals H. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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