A Man of Few Words

A moment in time,  time to realize just who
I am & where I stood in life.
To look into the eyes of my mentor & watch him
as he cried.
Tears of Honor, Respect & Pride
My proudest moment in life, was
telling my Pops,  I had joined the Army.
Letting him know I was ready to fight.
Standing there with a stupid look on my face,
I wasn't sure just what he'd say.
I thought he would be angry but he seemed 
to be okay,
Blinking my way, past tears of my own.
Trying to show him, I was brave.
I said, "It's Time for me to leave place,
time to leave where I was, raised.
As he wiped away a tear running down his face,
he turned to me and said, "keep your head low & your spirit high
make sure you come home safe.. 
On the morning I left, he shook me in bed,
then said, "Don't forget what I told you
keep you head low & your spirit high
make sure you come home safe".
then he turned and walked away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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George   Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 3:18 AM
Dear David, This touched me very deeply. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest. Love, Lainie
Winter Avatar
August 17, 2008 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations David on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest! Love, Shar
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August 17, 2008 at 12:50 PM
What a emotional example of a memory containing the depth of love. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Mark's favorite moment contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Reynolds Avatar
August 7, 2008 at 6:28 PM
What a beautiful, life-moment to share with us - this was so touching, and real - I loved it. You are a brave man, and I thank you for fighting for this great land - and a poet to boot! Right on. Blessings, Kristin
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