Dalia Shahein Poet Light Verse

A Man Feelings

You know deep down that I do care......
And I love you so much that what you should know...
It's obvious from the heart beat that we share ....
When we first went to write our vows...
I thank God cause he given me a bless....
Every day I'll love you more until my death...
I've realized it from the first time I've reached you for a kiss....
You'll feel my love through every breathe I breath....
Your the blood in my veins and the lyrics to my song...
Your the one who protect me from every storm...
I know that loving you could never be wrong...
Your the sun that holds me to keep me warm...
I'm afraid I die, before I see your face....
Or before I hold you tight....
If you wasn't in my life I wouldn't know my place...
Before I touch your soft lips under the moon light...
Time does run away fast..
And it hurts to know that you'll be gone...
I don't want our kiss to be the last ....
When I know your the one who gives me the strength to hold on...
So promise me that even when we die we'll meet again....
Promise me to use your angel touch to heal my soul deep within...

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Justin Bordner October 20, 2015 at 2:09 AM Dalia, your feelings are the validation of love's promise, your song be firey sweet, your beauty be living poetry..."Everyday I'll love you more until my death..." amazing! J.A.B. A FAV!! Dalia Shahein October 20, 2015 at 5:42 AM Thank you very much my friend for ur sweet sweet comment I really do appreciate your kindness , and I'm really glad u liked it.

A. Juman October 19, 2015 at 8:52 PM Dalia-You have the right attitude to write but I will tell you what I tell my self--Cut the lines shorter. Be descriptive with less words. It good keep it up. Lots of love here Dalia Shahein October 20, 2015 at 5:40 AM Thank you very much my friend for ur lovely comment, I appreciate yr stopping by.... :) Justin Bordner October 20, 2015 at 2:01 AM Her poem is perfect as is! Her beauty is true, her talent powerful! J.A.B.

Eric Boddie October 19, 2015 at 3:36 PM dalia, that is how Love should be....it should feel effortless like destiny....it should fill the heart pass full capacity....at least that's the way to Love according to me....;) Dalia Shahein October 19, 2015 at 4:50 PM Ur definitely right my friend ,I'm really happy that u felt this poem like I wanted people to do so. So glad u got the message that it's holding......thank you very much for stopping by and I'm so glad u liked it. Hugs :D

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2015 at 3:01 PM - I absolutely adore this touching and lovely poem, Dalia - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Dalia Shahein October 19, 2015 at 4:44 PM Thank you very much my sweet Anne for stopping by .....I'm really glad you liked it.... Love and hugs :) <3