A Man Called Leo

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I tread between green mounds of decay, surrounded by rows of engraved stone. Lost in thought, I lose track of the day, for I've seldom felt so all alone. Where death lingers between monoliths, an air of somber clings to the shade. But despite supernatural myths, I begin to wander unafraid. A dying sun bleeds on every grave, resurrecting memories of old. And reading words the living engrave, I seek warmth within a love gone cold. My sad heart disputes the pains of youth, still in denial despite years of ache. And eager to disregard the truth, tears dissipate like drops in a lake. I crouch low before the place I seek, here lies a military hero. And a single tear runs down my cheek, for my father, a man called Leo.

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Date: 4/7/2022 3:19:00 PM
Emile, I read "A Man Called Leo" again today. I cried this time. I will hate leaving this world without giving my father due respect, but, I don't suppose I ever will. I'm glad you found that place, and I hope I will one day. I don't have that much time, any more. If abusive fathers only realized what they do to their sons! But, then again, would they care?
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2022 6:20:00 AM
Thanks again my friend, we share a past that continues to haunt us, because we want what we know we didn't nor will ever have...the love of a father, take care of yourself my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/6/2021 10:42:00 AM
Emile, thanks so much for suggesting I read your poem. I never shed a tear for my father, but I came to understand him better through counselling. This is a beautiful poem in all respects. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/6/2021 3:07:00 PM
Thank you L., we share a pain that is tethered to the past my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/15/2018 8:17:00 PM
Awesome poem. A definite FAVE for me. Superb, Emile.
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/20/2017 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations Emile win your fine win with this excellent write.
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Date: 9/21/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/20/2017 2:46:00 PM
congratulations Emile
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Date: 9/20/2017 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 9/20/2017 1:07:00 PM
Smile, excellent write and congratulations !
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 9/20/2017 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations Emile :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/20/2017 7:08:00 AM
Great take on the contest, with some great lines.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 9/20/2017 9:41:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/18/2017 11:27:00 PM
This is a beautiful and very moving poem Emile!
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/18/2017 8:50:00 PM
Very moving & well written, Emile
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/18/2017 7:14:00 PM
Lovely piece Emile (and not just because my grandfather was named Leo too :) good luck in the contest! xomo
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:24:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/18/2017 7:06:00 PM
Your father did one thing right - he made a very talented and loving son!
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:24:00 AM
Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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