A Man Called Bill

(Limerick) The other day met a man called Bill He just did lots of things for a thrill Got legs up in the air Till along came a bear He hit his head and rolled down the hill. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 September, 24,2014

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/26/2014 11:01:00 PM

Very sad, I think it's. After thrilling rolled down the hill. After thundering, there's rainfall. Beautiful limerick you have penned. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2014 2:14:00 AM

LOL Dorian I do love limericks to make me smile :-) hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2014 12:23:00 PM

I've written one or two Dorian I have to try not to be too bawdy LOL. Hugs Jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/24/2014 12:20:00 PM

Love writing them a lot too. I do know what you mean.The only problem for me, is that they are quite addictive, and that can create me a bad situation since I want and need to write in the other so many poetic forms I love to write or try. I just love Limericks so much! Lol...thank you so much Jan for dropping by! Love and Light! Hugs and have a very delightful day my friend! xxx D.