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This story is based upon the nursery rhyme called, 'Hey, Diddle Diddle.' 

Sunflower Meadows was a place of mystical beauty, green and abloom. That's where seven-year-old Ava lived, like laughter and spicy perfume. Ava lived with her parents and three siblings, like stars dance together; And she loved golden, nursery rhymes, like sunshine, carnival pleasure. Their farm was small but busy, and all of the family had sundry chores. Ava collected eggs and fed poultry, eating and picking berries, outdoors. Faint flurries of wind cooled afternoon, and family came, in floppy hats; Like the fortunate, flattered feeling, of knowing you're loved-like lilacs! Ava lived in a house of wonder, in the land precious time had passed by; Where anything was possible when children believed. Rainbow lullabies! Rambling ravens alit on emerald trees, on a road of rose remembrance, Running wild at the farm house's rear, with the lingering scent presence. Never negligent neighbors brought nosegays, in dusks of jeweled gain; And on porches, noticed nature-on moonlit nights, of nightingale refrain. 'Scarce rare phantom' petunias appeared, when summer came, dreaming, During gold days and mulberry nights, of 'shark tooth' pagodas, gleaming. Teal sky raised amazed rainbow brows, at beautiful, 'mednilla magnifica,' And 'clown epiphyllum' blooms wore showy colors, over rich, green vistas. One day, as buttery skies turned red-purple, the family sat on the porch; They gazed at cows grazing in grass, and at the pretty scenery, scorched. A neighbor joined them on this evening, talking of novels and nut bread; And their dog and cat ran playing, as the rest ate a snack, in fading red. Ava had been practicing on her violin, which she found difficult and boring; And she'd lain the hated instrument aside, as a creamy moon, kept adoing. Ava suddenly heard strains of divine music, streaming from her own violin. The cat was now playing a sweet melody, as if such like had forever been! Everyone gaped in wonder and delight, as if somehow in a pleasant trance; And under starry, June skies, on that magic night, they all started to dance! When the music finally died down, they all felt the fun had ended too soon; Until the moment, all marveled to see, a certain cow jump over the moon! Suddenly, there was uproarious laughter from the dog! All loudly joined in; Its volume increasing, as dish and spoon eloped, like starlight on a mission! Ava loved her violin after that, for it'd given the gift of nursery rhyme magic; And as the mystic beauty of music's a gift, not reveling in it, would be tragic! 'Hey diddle diddle, The cat and the fiddle, The cow jumped over the moon; The little dog laughed To see such sport, And the dish ran away with the spoon.'

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Date: 2/14/2025 12:44:00 AM
A magical, wonderful version of the nursery rhyme! Well written!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/14/2025 9:18:00 PM
Thank you for your very gratifying words, Daisy. :)
Date: 2/9/2025 10:47:00 PM
Such a masterful story tale told by the only one that can captivate and bring us a lovely creative write Evelyn. The music went perfect with the words, and aided in the story line. Enjoyed so much reading. You are really a master at recreating Nursery Rhymes with exceptional themes and story lines. Your unique creativity keeps the reader wanting to read and enjoy your magical words. Thank you so much for your creative thoughts. God bless you...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/10/2025 6:05:00 PM
Thank you for the distinct pleasure of reading your lovely remarks, dear friend. Your enjoyment of this tale is my delight. Have a wonderful week. :)
Date: 2/9/2025 9:12:00 PM
Bravo, maestra! Love it. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 2/9/2025 10:26:00 PM
That's nice to know, Gershon. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 2/9/2025 4:35:00 PM
absolutely ravishing poetry, with great alliterations and outstanding images, thanks dear poet for the pleasure
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Date: 2/8/2025 8:52:00 AM
Dear evelyn, i love this nursery rhyme, and i absolutely love what youv done with it, in such a creative manner as always with excellent rhymes and flow with beautiful imagery in such a descriptive manner that gets the readers to see through your eloquent word weaving! I especially love the ending and how youv included the song, i sang along as i read this! Pleasure always reading you! Sending you light today and always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/8/2025 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, dear Ink, for your lovely compliments, and your warm, spirit lifting insights and appreciation. Many blessings.
Date: 2/8/2025 2:07:00 AM
- A wonderful story, Evelyn... I always enjoy these poems from you :) - You really have the gift of nursery rhyme.... which makes it magic :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/8/2025 8:49:00 PM
I appreciate your warm remarks so much, Anne-Lise. Thank you for your lovely compliments, which go straight to my heart. hugs and blessings.
Date: 2/8/2025 2:04:00 AM
You write such beautiful tales. I hope never to miss your Saturday missive. Blessings.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/8/2025 8:44:00 PM
Thank you for making me smile. It's so great to read your thoughts on these tales each week. I love your stories, too. Have a good weekend.
Date: 2/7/2025 11:38:00 PM
gentle write. so refreshing.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/8/2025 8:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Thriveni. :)
Date: 2/7/2025 8:29:00 PM
I enjoy the old rhyme and this new one. I have told would be poets to study this poem because it is a good starting point. At least, if they desire rhyme. Thanks for another childhood journey.
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Date: 2/7/2025 10:43:00 PM
Dear Hilda, thank you for adding sunshine to my day with your uplifting words. What a compliment it is that you're telling aspiring poets to study my work! I hope your weekend is blessed.
Date: 2/7/2025 8:20:00 PM
This was truly a very heartwarming and musical read, dear Evelyn! I felt so serene whilst waltzing through your whimsical words and living in the story which Ava breathed. Your descriptions are absolutely enchanting, always! Indeed, a magnificent storyteller you are who always conveys imagery and emotions through vivid colours and floral fragrances that can paint any soul with so much joy!! I particularly loved reading "Rambling ravens alit on emerald trees, on a road of rose remembrance" "Scarce rare phantom' petunias appeared, when summer came, dreaming" So creative and evocative. A pleasure reading your work always. Hope you are doing well, missed your artistic sagas!!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:37:00 PM
Dear Hiya, it's so nice to have you back! Thank you so much for your very nice compliments, which bring joy and smiles. I am doing very well, thank you. I hope your weekend is nice. :)
Date: 2/7/2025 5:56:00 PM
A magical read amidst the lovely music!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)

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