A Magical Night

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go . . . "
                                   ee Cummings





We walked along the beach under the moonlight one summer’s night
Hand and hand, feeling the excitement and anticipation of new love
The waves crashing loudly, smells of salty brine air mixed with sweet roses
Warm sand under our bare feet as we found a spot on the deserted beach

The moonlight lit up your face and your eyes sparkled as you smiled
We sat on our blanket for hours and talked about our life and our dreams
It was a magical night, you were my first love, I will always remember
You caressed my face, and kissed me softly, it felt like time stopped

Passions ignited, our bodies embraced, danced to the rhythm of the waves
We laid on our backs, while looking at the stars, as the ocean waves calmed 
We fell asleep for hours and woke to reality, we had to leave and head home
It was a start of a whirlwind romance that only lasted for three short months

We got back to my car, parked under the street light, it was three am
A romantic song, came on the radio, you took my hand and we danced
I felt like the luckiest girl alive that night, my dreams came true with you
Three months later you broke my heart, when you no longer loved me 

11/15/19


Writing Challenge, November- Some Kind of Love 

Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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Barden Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 5:16 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Tania - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o) <3
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December 13, 2019 at 6:08 AM
Thank you Greg and thank you for your visit! Happy Holidays to you and yours as well my friend! :)
Na Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Tania
Kitchin Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Greg!
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December 11, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Wonderful write Tania, congrats for placing in my contest!
Kitchin Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Thank you John!
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November 19, 2019 at 10:23 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
Kitchin Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 2:06 PM
Thank you Eve!
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November 18, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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November 19, 2019 at 4:42 AM
Thank you Brenda!
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November 18, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful emotional write, oh the lost love is the hardest to carry !
Kitchin Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 4:42 AM
Thank you Constance and thank you for my placement in your contest!
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November 18, 2019 at 2:01 PM
- Congratulations on a great 4th place in the contest, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 7:52 AM
What a wonderful time that ended with tears. Loved your poem Tania, you painted a picture of true romance but the final line was a killer. Best wishes in the contest.
Kitchin Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Chris!:)
Na Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 5:18 AM
Very romantic Tania. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest
Kitchin Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 6:00 AM
Thank you!
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