A Made Up Memory

Her ghost appeared as clocks were chiming twelve that night,
and those around me said she looked the same;
she hadn't altered - though, of course,
she held her head beneath
her arm, and didn't look as well as once before,
her severed head was dripping greenish blood. 

She floated, never leaving footprints in the mud,
and left a grisly trail of reeking gore,
the head was spitting yellow teeth,
which shot with deadly force -
I laughed because I knew it was to her a game,
and she was set on giving them a fright.

Though soaked  in blood, her dress was still a shade of white.
Quite suddenly I shouted out her name,
then heard the neighing of her horse;
it wore a mourning wreath,
and sadly carried her towards the barren moor.
She hurled her head, but no one caught it. Thud!

written 28th December for Constance's A Little Memory contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Back with congrats. Sara
La France Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, excellent poem, I love it _Constance
Callus Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 2:31 PM
Your ripe imagination has had a creepy field day, Jack! The ending somehow reminded me of the bride throwing her bouquet of flowers for a 'un/lucky' someone to catch and become like her!! // paul
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January 2, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Oh Wow Jack I though my poem I posted about 10 days ago would give people nightmares 'Hypnotic Poison's Christmas revenge' - I sure will have some sort of nightmare tonight although I have to admit I love a scary tale''She hurled her head, but no one caught it. Thud! Dynamic poetry! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 10:22 AM
the last line is hilarious, Jack!! Though it's meant to be a scary poem, I enjoyed that comic ending. Well done, my friend.
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Thud! Great imagery and cold feeling, Jack. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 1:20 PM
As this got more bloody, I got more sensitive. Reads like a winner to me. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 1:00 PM
now this is seriously creepy and amazingly well written!! hugs jan xx
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