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A candle flame flickers in the dark and a moth seduced by its light falls into a trance; hypnotized as it swoops and dives waltzing with the flame's flittering tempo, dodging deadly kisses; life and death partnered in a macabre dance of desire and compulsion.

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Date: 6/25/2019 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem with amazing imagery, Emile:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2019 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/29/2019 2:11:00 PM
Awesome write!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/29/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/29/2019 8:37:00 AM
you can never stop them heading for the source of light even if it means its their demise. well penned Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/29/2019 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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