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A Lusty Bar-Maiden

There once was a lusty bar-maiden Born in the Republic of Aden -- You'd order your drink She'd give you a wink -- She hoped for a kiss on the trade-in

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/22/2019 2:06:00 AM

Simple, cute and creative - well penned Gershon, Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2019 10:47:00 PM

Appreciate your generous evaluation, Jennifer. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2019 3:10:00 PM

ohh, lovely teaser, gershon... i see you did lims one after another.. i had to post 2 pieces as well due to soup's intermission... had fun with this!...huggs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 4:46:00 PM

I was actually just rattling these limericks off today. A rare burst of creativity, I guess. Thanks for the nice review on the bar-maid, nette. Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/21/2019 1:38:00 PM

Haha my kind of bar maiden

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 1:41:00 PM

Get to the bar early, before she runs out of kisses... :) gw