A Lucid Dream As a Visitation

I used to have a lovely mini-dog
who followed me wherever I would go.
Nobody in my family cared for him,
for only I he loved – that Eskimo!

Into my arms he’d leap when I got home
from having worked. He’d wait beside the door
and know instinctively that I’d be coming.
No other doggie could I have loved more.

It happened that I had to part with him.
My heard was broken, but I’d been assured
a “no-kill” policy protected him,
and always by someone he’d be procured.

A few years later, as I lay asleep,
I woke, and to my great amazement, he
was right there on the bed. I said his name.
Excitedly, my dear dog jumped to me.

I felt him in my arms; I rubbed my face
into his fur; I smelled and felt it too.
He was as soft as I remembered him.
My dream to be with him again came true.

I ended back inside another dream
with my small dog; and here’s what I discerned:
his soul had flown, but right as he had died,
on his way out – to me he had returned!

April 11, 2023
for Unseeking Seeker's A Wisdom Download Poetry Contest
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Fowler Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 10:07 AM
An uplifting poem, although a bit sad Andrea. I enjoyed the tale! :)
Baker Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 5:08 PM
A pleasant poem to read. You domlove your dogs. Good luck in the contest, Andrea. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Ricci Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 3:52 AM
Oh Andrea. Good Morning. How beautiful and loving is this. Very. I believe in dreams and their power of feelings and emotions. This was a true pleasure to read. The emotive factor is present. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings. (smile)
Rolland Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 12:15 AM
a touching story, dogs can be very affective, introducing dreams, thanks yann
Mcintosh Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 11:56 PM
I so love this... I had a dog named Oscar who I had a similar dream about just after he died. It was so real. I love this so. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Hawley Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Interesting story. Did that happen to you, and I mean actually?
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 8:27 PM
Yes it really happened to me, so I believe his spirit was saying goodbye to me as he left this realm. I later called Pet Smart and they told me he never adapted to just one family. I was his only person. That made me feel happy . I can't verify exact date of his death but he was already dead when I finally called PetSmart about a year after my visitation it makes sense he would have died at around age 12 since I had had him for 10 years. He had a few little health issues when I was forced to give him up
Turner Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 6:52 AM
A comforting thought but a sad poem, Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 8:30 PM
Not sad, Daniel. He is in doggy heaven and I hope to be greeted by him and my brother Dale when I leave the earth
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