A Low Church

“All war is a deception”

The day was chilly and dark
Low clouds hung over the sun
A low church stood a silent witness
To the raging sea and surf
Past its bent arch, darkness reigned
A candle lit slowly by the priest.
One by one the faces come to light.
Amused bronze. Smiling stone. Unsurprised.
For a time the length of that candle
gesture after gesture revives and dies.
Stance after lost stance is found
and lost again.
Who was that, you ask.
The saviour, the son, the priest replies.
A sceptic candle coughs.
I count the angels on the wall
And mother Mary’s soft tears
As all around the war rages
You come out in the dark sun
And find the children playing the game of death

24/09/2011

By Tahera Mannan

For constance’s “The Church by the ocean” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Williams Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 7:15 PM
This is excellent Tahera, I like it. Very powerful.
Haick Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 10:22 PM
Brilliant and deep write, Tahera. I believe in a universal church also...a church "without walls". Congratulations on your fine win...well deserved! Love, Annalise
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 9:45 PM
wonderfully penned Tahera, congrats on your win in the contest
Merryman Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Good imagery, Tahera. Congrats on your win. Kim
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:00 PM
An intense interpretation of the contest. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Congrats Tahera on a wonderful well deserved win with these brilliant lines of beauty my friend.. the e mail I sent u bounced back to me.. what do u want to do now? luv..
Haick Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 1:08 PM
A powerful poem, Tahera! Deep and profound....Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest. Love, Annalise
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October 5, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your win with this very thoughtful poem Tahera
Lane Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:26 AM
Great work in the contest. Congratulations on your win.
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 3:30 PM
such a grand write Tahera..luv the quote ..it is so true my friend.. war is deception.. lovely lines will earn u a top spot in this contest..beautiful as always..good luck..luv..
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September 24, 2011 at 3:07 PM
What a wonderful vividly descriptive piece, Tahera. Many congrats on your wins too
Gorelick Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Im so glad I stopped by..this is one of the best pieces Ive read in a while. You should be very proud...I love the last line..it is brilliant. BG
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