A Lover's Duet

The farmer's pond was still and dark
the boat was small and light
two lovers they did disembark
their pleasure to excite,
all on a summer's night.

He rowed them out and let them float
into his arms she came,
the dense pine cloaked, kept them remote
two lover's sought their claim,
their passions so inflamed.

She felt him smile, as off he leapt
from boat to waist high lea,
he beckoned her into his keep
a groom and his beauty,
all night's passions to foresee.

On the soft sand, the fertile land
he pledged his troth to she,
as maid and man blessed the soft sand
with raucous revelry 
lovers in harmony.


10/9/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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November 7, 2012 at 3:15 PM
Congrats on your winning work.Sara
Horsman Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 3:11 PM
awesome Debbie, would fit in very well with the poems of the old english Romanticism era...
Song Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 12:34 PM
Exquisite work as always...u are amazing, Deb! Congrats on this golden write!!! It unfolds like a romance song!..luv, gwendolen
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations Debbie this is super xx
Macmillan Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 8:19 AM
Oh, sexy in the softest way, hmm, lol, or should that be sway? Francine choice as this in first place is bang on. Love the meter (hey, me? Yes, I love the meter here!) Congrats! PS--Still no news from Andrew? Does he have any close friends on the soup?
Mannan Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 1:27 AM
Beautiful Write Deb. Warm congrats for the win.
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 11:28 PM
Congratulations Debbie ....Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Love it ,love it, love it, congrats on your first place win
Wellington Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 9:50 PM
O Debbie!! What a fix for lovers!! I felt old school love and passion, oozing from these words. A tantilizing write my friend. Enjoyed to the max. Best wishes. One love. Joy Wells
Yamin Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 7:05 PM
I agree with your observation that translating thoughts from a second language is an ordeal. Although I write and have published my books of poems in two languages, but believe me, I don't translate my thoughts. I think in the language I write. The thoughts that come in my mind in Urdu I write in Urdu language and this applies to my English writings as well. In July this year my poems in English were published in USA by Createspace of Amazon titled The Rainbow of Dreams. Regards. -Mohammad
Yamin Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 6:39 PM
This is an enchanting love poem -so full of rythm and romance. Highly captivating. I am glad I read it. Thanks Debbie for your comments on my poem The Cry of Heart as well as your kind explanation. The word 'fries' was not used as noun. It was used for rhyming reason to convey the meaning of 'burns'. French fries may be common in eating culture in USA. But this was not in the remotest corner of my mind while writing the word. Love and regards. -Mohammad
Horsman Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Oh dear, why not you're good at every other subject, in poetry, what i'm trying to say, is, i like this a lot
Onclaud Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:08 PM
you make me starry-eyed, debbie... tremendous write filled with sweet romance!..:) huggs and win it!.. SOUP MAIL
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Love is forever young, take good care of it. -Gorgeous poem Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:01 PM
A story of passion. Love that last stanza, Debs. I gotta get going on this one!! Looks like one I can get into. You are sure to make her winners' list!
Brown Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Debbie. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 9:16 AM
lol, love this one, Debs. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )
Guzzi Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 1:48 PM
hey hey a true story..I missed a good part trying to think how to fit it in before the beach!
Lander Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 7:32 AM
A Hallmark moment i seen a warm feeling with this one. he pledge hs troth to she. a bit of shakespearan
Carrillo Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Debbie; Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us. There is nothing like being in love. Lucy
Ramage Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Reminds me of a canoe trip my hubbie and I took when we were first married... I digress, loved the poem, well done. lee
Parker Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 7:36 PM
A ballad of cinquains with velvet threads chained. A beautifully sculpted lovescape. The romance is artistically woven. Enjoyed your palpitating verses.
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