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A Lover's Covenant

Parched Desert needs rain
You the rain I the desert
An eternal need

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/21/2010 7:51:00 AM
now thats loved returned. john
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:34:00 PM
Did you meet on the soup or were you already a couple?? That is a sweet poem for David!!
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:45:00 PM
Nice picture you have drawn of the lover's covenant, Joy with images of Desert and Rain
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:21:00 PM
Two beautiful elements and two beautiful beings, both needing each other, taking and giving eternally!!! Fabulous, brilliant Haiku, Joy.... Blessings to you and David, always! Thank you for your love and kindness! Much love, Audrey
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:49:00 AM
A beautiful covenant Joy and testimony of your love for David ;-) this made me smile ~ love Wilma
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:11:00 AM
Very, very, Impressed here. What a blend.. But no one answered my question... Really and honestly i love this haiku. Me and Nathan, who i meet here on the soup describes ourselves,, as the moon and the ocean.. and once we described our selves as the desert and water,, which rain is the same... Love it joy,, adding it to my favorites,, along with you,, Love this Haiku,, small word say a lot, and David, on the bottom sure has a way with words,, have a blessed day,..p.d.
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:58:00 AM
Awesome words Joy and taken to heart very deeply luv.. appreciate u enjoying my example poem for my current contest.. hope u will try to enter luv.. u are an amazing writer ..so gifted.. be blessed on this happy day ...
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:31:00 AM
Hi Joy.This is a beautiful Haiku,signifying love between two people.I love the images you have used.But of course you can put a different slant on it and see it as spiritual love.So much meaning to be read in so few words.I find this clever,it gives the reader what they need from it.I love it.It satisfies my spirit and my human heart.Love June(Sylvia)
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Date: 11/16/2010 5:41:00 AM
Dear Joy, Absolutely Superb Haiku of Eternal LOVE I can feel YOUR Desire, Need, and LOVE David is a very Lucky Man and YOU are Fortunate to have his LOVE. I Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM " The Black Caribbean Sun " I appreciate when one reads me with the feelings I wrote it ALWAYS YOUR Liege, LOVE...HG
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