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light keeps the sky somewhat hued beyond hills vibe to bliss sundown pyres merge in cusp unquenched gloat the sun-kissed clouds poised by the deep and azure sky deepening in blonde light the beauty of the sight desires a cloudy sky spruce charmingly flow high landscape partially brown weeds wangle and stay down autumn's charm pique on soft bed leaves
Written: August 30, 2022 1st place contest winner Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina https://www.rhymezone.com https://www.howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 10/21/2022 2:24:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this one. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/19/2022 1:55:00 PM
Back with big congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/19/2022 2:40:00 AM
A Lovely Sky Needs Clouds - well said and beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2022 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations, dear friend on your great win! Thanks once again for presenting before us a celestial picturesque scene!
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Date: 10/18/2022 3:02:00 PM
You did so well, Lasaad. Great imagery and beautifully written. Congratulations my friend, on your 1st place win! Charlie
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Date: 10/18/2022 3:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, appreciate you sponsoring, reading, and placing my poem. Blessings and regards. SMail.
Date: 9/8/2022 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Lasaad! Linda
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Date: 9/6/2022 9:36:00 AM
Your inner charm in writing this exquisite poem, portrays how charming Autumn can be. You always describe your scenes and beauty and peace and raging seas with joyous fulfillment, you have a passion for life and beautify any poem you write and post, portrays this and certainly this poem is no exception. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 9/2/2022 6:33:00 PM
This one is one is a favorite my friend. It is Vibrant and spectacular imagery in your words revealed. An incredible entry to be at the very top of the selection. Thank you for Posting Lasaad, your Poetry is always Marvelous...
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Date: 9/2/2022 7:03:00 PM
Appreciate your great words Michael and I’m so happy you find this poem fine. Your encouraging words go straight to heart as they come undoubtedly from your heart. Blessings and best wishes to you. Blessings
Date: 9/2/2022 3:44:00 PM
Your poetry is utterly charming in every way, picturesque and lively, thank you for sharing Sotto, God Bless
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Date: 9/2/2022 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Venicia, I’m so touched by your nice comment. Blessings and hugs
Date: 9/1/2022 10:23:00 AM
Brilliant imagery in your verse Lasaad, the sky looks bare without them. Tom
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Date: 9/1/2022 5:24:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara
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Date: 8/31/2022 4:50:00 PM
Superb poetry Sotto, your words describe the lovely autumnal scene perfectly… Belle
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Date: 8/31/2022 1:26:00 PM
Your imagery is breathtaking, Lasaad. The flow of each line made it enjoyable to read. I love your way of describing scene and things. It's poetic, my friend. This entry should place high in this contest. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/31/2022 6:25:00 AM
Sun kissed cloud, deep azure sky---exquisite imagery throughout, Lasaad. Best for a win.
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Date: 8/31/2022 5:20:00 AM
Eventide brings a great vision. I agree. Clouds are necessary.
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Date: 8/30/2022 11:23:00 PM
From sky to earth, beautiful picture painted, SP ~ good luck in the contest!
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Date: 8/30/2022 10:03:00 PM
The evening sky though colored and beautiful at sundown longs to be speckled with clouds ! Lovely penning, so picturesque .....All the Best in the contest.
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