Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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A Lovely Sky Needs Clouds

light keeps the sky
somewhat hued
beyond hills
vibe to bliss
sundown pyres
merge in cusp
unquenched gloat
the sun-kissed clouds

poised by the deep and azure sky
deepening in blonde light
the beauty of the sight
desires a cloudy sky
spruce charmingly flow high
landscape partially brown
weeds wangle and stay down
autumn's charm pique on soft bed leaves

Written: August 30, 2022

1st place contest winner

Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick October 21, 2022 at 2:24 AM Back with congratulations on this one. Way to go. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler October 19, 2022 at 1:55 PM Back with big congratulations on your win!

Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 2:40 AM A Lovely Sky Needs Clouds - well said and beautifully written. Congratulations!

Valsa George October 18, 2022 at 9:47 PM Congratulations, dear friend on your great win! Thanks once again for presenting before us a celestial picturesque scene!

Charles Messina October 18, 2022 at 3:02 PM You did so well, Lasaad. Great imagery and beautifully written. Congratulations my friend, on your 1st place win! Charlie Sotto Poet October 18, 2022 at 3:14 PM Thank you so much, appreciate you sponsoring, reading, and placing my poem. Blessings and regards. SMail.

Linda Alice Fowler September 8, 2022 at 1:18 PM Beautiful imagery Lasaad! Linda

Jennifer Proxenos September 6, 2022 at 9:36 AM Your inner charm in writing this exquisite poem, portrays how charming Autumn can be. You always describe your scenes and beauty and peace and raging seas with joyous fulfillment, you have a passion for life and beautify any poem you write and post, portrays this and certainly this poem is no exception. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Michael Tor September 2, 2022 at 6:33 PM This one is one is a favorite my friend. It is Vibrant and spectacular imagery in your words revealed. An incredible entry to be at the very top of the selection. Thank you for Posting Lasaad, your Poetry is always Marvelous... Sotto Poet September 2, 2022 at 7:03 PM Appreciate your great words Michael and I’m so happy you find this poem fine. Your encouraging words go straight to heart as they come undoubtedly from your heart. Blessings and best wishes to you. Blessings

Mystic Rose Rose September 2, 2022 at 3:44 PM Your poetry is utterly charming in every way, picturesque and lively, thank you for sharing Sotto, God Bless Sotto Poet September 2, 2022 at 7:06 PM Thank you so much Venicia, I’m so touched by your nice comment. Blessings and hugs

Tom Cunningham September 1, 2022 at 10:23 AM Brilliant imagery in your verse Lasaad, the sky looks bare without them. Tom

Sara Kendrick September 1, 2022 at 5:24 AM Very descriptive and expressive work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara

Beryl Edmonds August 31, 2022 at 4:50 PM Superb poetry Sotto, your words describe the lovely autumnal scene perfectly… Belle

Bill Baker August 31, 2022 at 1:26 PM Your imagery is breathtaking, Lasaad. The flow of each line made it enjoyable to read. I love your way of describing scene and things. It's poetic, my friend. This entry should place high in this contest. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Vijay Pandit August 31, 2022 at 6:25 AM Sun kissed cloud, deep azure sky---exquisite imagery throughout, Lasaad. Best for a win.

Victor Buhagiar August 31, 2022 at 5:20 AM Eventide brings a great vision. I agree. Clouds are necessary.

Unseeking Seeker August 30, 2022 at 11:23 PM From sky to earth, beautiful picture painted, SP ~ good luck in the contest!

Valsa George August 30, 2022 at 10:03 PM The evening sky though colored and beautiful at sundown longs to be speckled with clouds ! Lovely penning, so picturesque .....All the Best in the contest.