A Lovely Dream

"I lie down and sleep; I wake again, because the Lord sustains me" Psalm 3:5


I dreamt I walked along the beach,
Alone at the end of day.
The glory of the setting sun,
A masterpiece on display.

A reddish-gold sun sank into the ocean,
A glowing full moon took it's place.
Cries of the gulls echoed in the silence,
Accompanied by the breaking of waves.

A salty breeze around me sighed,
Wrapping me in it's cocoon.
And then I saw the strangest sight - 
An old church nestled in the dunes.

Small it was and out of place,
This chapel by the sea.
A radiant light shone from within,
And gently beckoned me.

Inside I saw a rough-hewn cross,
Hanging from a rafter high.
Before it stood a simple altar,
A place to worship God Most High.

There were no lamps or candles burning,
Yet light shown all around,
And while I stood in silent wonder,
I heard a lovely sound.

Soft music filled the hallowed air,
Enveloping me in such peace.
"Amazing grace, how sweet the sound,"
Brought me to my knees.

Lifting up my eyes, I saw Him,
My Savior gazing down at me.
The love in His eyes was overwhelming,
As He gently brought me to my feet.

He said, "I'm so glad to see you,"
"Welcome to this special place."
He spread His arms wide open,
And drew me into His embrace.

I felt so loved and cherished,
My worries and fears were relieved.
I never wanted to let Him go,
When I did I felt bereaved.

He said "Remember how much I love you,"
As He showed me His nail-scarred hands.
" I will never leave you nor forsake you,"
"No one can snatch you from my hand."

Then He kissed me on my forehead,
Said "Sweet dreams, my precious one."
And when I opened up my eyes,
I saw that He had gone.

It was then that I awakened,
As the alarm began to ring.
And I wondered: was this really just a lovely dream,
Or a visit from my King? 


Kim Merryman    9/24/2011
for Constance' "Church by the Ocean" contest
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Koya Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Wow nice. I wish for that dream so often.
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 9:33 PM
congrats on the shared number one spot Kim, loved this the first time I read it
Fassbender Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:40 PM
Kim, this is absolutely wonderful and I loved every line; a well deserved placement in this contest. I will definitely read more of your work. Lovely!!!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Congrats Kim on your wonderful well deserved first place win luv..
Flach Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Lovely poetry Kim! Congrats on your 1st place.
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 4:47 PM
What a lovely poem. lCongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Beautiful writing, Kim. The lovely imagery and flow keeps the reader enthralled. Congratulations on your very deserving win. Love, Annalise
Quigley Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Great poem. Great imagery. A well deserved first place Kim. Must say though that I was confused by the first verse where the sun was setting at the break of day. But I loved it anyway, regardless of which way the sun was going:)
Richards Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Such inspiration and loveliness in this church by the ocean. A lovely winning poem, Kim........congratulations!!
Lane Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:19 AM
Well done. Excellent poem. Tony
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on your win Kim in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Very beautiful poem, Kim! Great imagery and I'm sure it will do well in Constance's Contest. Thanks for reading, "Autums's Glow". Love, Annalise
Quigley Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Well written Kim. Good luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 10:18 PM
YOu took the ball and ran with it when you took this challenge, Kim. Very well done, my friend. And a very lovely message.
Merryman Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 7:30 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poems. Kim
Kriticos Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Thank you for posting that Kim. Warm centimeters in your words. It's good to read once again that promise from the man himself "I will never leave you nor forsake you"
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September 25, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Thank you, Kyle. I'm glad it had some meaning for you. Kim
Wilson Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 3:54 PM
This is just beautiful ..really terrific..best of luck to you...love,Deb
Merryman Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Thank you, Deb and thanks for taking the time to read my poem. Kim
Roberts Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 2:09 PM
this is stunning, just beautiful, I was mesmerized thoughout the whole poem, I am sure it will do amazing in the contest Kim , best of luck
Merryman Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 7:32 PM
Thank you, Francine. I'm glad you liked it. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poems. Kim
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