A Lovely Day

The bright sun was peeking through the curtain,
I opened it up wide to let the light in.
In the trees the birds are singing,
singing songs just to me.
Oh what a pretty day,
they are singing away.
Dressed and outside I will go,
my garden awaits with a glow.
The flowers with their perfume smell,
now calling bees and butterflies from everywhere.
I sit sipping my cup of coffee,
as I watch the beauty of this day.
Date Written: 2/23/2022
3 Place
A Lovely Day Contest Judged: 3/2/2022
 
Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley
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Legros Kelley Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Paula, congratulations on your winning placement in our poetry contest, and thank you for your submission! I hope you are having a blessed and lovely day!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................
George Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 6:36 PM
I can imagine you sitting in your cozy room enjoying the beauty of the day and sipping a cup of coffee.... ! Your poem has given me such a lovely feel, Paula !Warm Regards
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 9:01 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. It is great when a poem can give one a lovely feeling. Have a great/blessed day......................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 10:41 AM
A charming sweet suite for Amadeus to set violins in a concerto, Paula, thanks for the smile, Aloha~William!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 8:59 AM
Thank You, for your note. So glad this gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles when I write. Have a great/blessed day...................
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Paula, Your poem brighten my evening. Well written. Blessings ~ Debra
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Thank You, for your note. So glad this write brighten your evening. Have a great/blessed day...................
Jayasankar Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 2:51 AM
Aw, what a sweet lovely day it must have been dear Paula...Enjoyed reading...Hugs...~ Ani
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Have a great/blessed day with hugs...................
Tor Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 1:55 PM
What our Lord has created for us to enjoy, he is wonderful and so is this piece Paula be blessed for sharing...
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this write. The Lord has created much for us to enjoy. Let's enjoy all of His many wonders. Have a great/blessed day..........
Y. Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 10:17 AM
Wow! Paula, You have composed a well-written write for the contest theme. The day looks lovely. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Thank You, for your note and for you best wishes. Glad you like my fun day. Have a great/blessed day..........
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