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A Lovely Day

The bright sun was peeking through the curtain,
I opened it up wide to let the light in.
In the trees the birds are singing,
singing songs just to me.
Oh what a pretty day,
they are singing away.
Dressed and outside I will go,
my garden awaits with a glow.
The flowers with their perfume smell,
now calling bees and butterflies from everywhere.
I sit sipping my cup of coffee,
as I watch the beauty of this day.
Date Written: 2/23/2022
3 Place
A Lovely Day Contest Judged: 3/2/2022
 
Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/2/2022 3:30:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your winning placement in our poetry contest, and thank you for your submission! I hope you are having a blessed and lovely day!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/3/2022 7:53:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................
Date: 2/25/2022 6:36:00 PM
I can imagine you sitting in your cozy room enjoying the beauty of the day and sipping a cup of coffee.... ! Your poem has given me such a lovely feel, Paula !Warm Regards
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2022 9:01:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. It is great when a poem can give one a lovely feeling. Have a great/blessed day......................
Date: 2/25/2022 10:41:00 AM
A charming sweet suite for Amadeus to set violins in a concerto, Paula, thanks for the smile, Aloha~William!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2022 8:59:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. So glad this gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles when I write. Have a great/blessed day...................
Date: 2/24/2022 4:49:00 PM
Paula, Your poem brighten my evening. Well written. Blessings ~ Debra
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. So glad this write brighten your evening. Have a great/blessed day...................
Date: 2/24/2022 2:51:00 AM
Aw, what a sweet lovely day it must have been dear Paula...Enjoyed reading...Hugs...~ Ani
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Have a great/blessed day with hugs...................
Date: 2/23/2022 1:55:00 PM
What our Lord has created for us to enjoy, he is wonderful and so is this piece Paula be blessed for sharing...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this write. The Lord has created much for us to enjoy. Let's enjoy all of His many wonders. Have a great/blessed day..........
Date: 2/23/2022 10:17:00 AM
Wow! Paula, You have composed a well-written write for the contest theme. The day looks lovely. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for you best wishes. Glad you like my fun day. Have a great/blessed day..........

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