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A Love To Know

What if love was like a river
     living wild and flowing free,
     like a ribbon through the heartland
     as far as one could see.
     Would forever mean forever,
     if this were truly meant to be?
     Could we leave sad memories
     on distant shores?

     What if peace was like a fire
     that stops the chill from winters hold
     and held each heart in comfort,
     away from pain that's growing old?
     Would forever mean forever
     with souls alone out in the cold?
     Could we leave sad memories
     outside our doors?

     What if hope had never found a way
     to keep us in its stead
     or hadn't even passed this way
     for want of what was said?
     We just might be wondering,
     just wondering alone,
     for all the love and warmth,
     your light has truly shown,
     and for the most enduring peace,
     this heart has ever known.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/10/2019 2:29:00 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, it would be wonderful to leave the sad memories outside the door at a distance so it does not enter in. That would be a good thing. Merry Christmas.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:10:00 PM
World of love and peace---- Wonderful my friend
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Charlie Smith
Date: 7/10/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Al...
Date: 6/30/2018 7:05:00 PM
Hi Charlie, this is such a wonderful piece. An excellent write. I was so happy to immerse myself in your beautiful words and thoughts. This one definitely came from the heart my friend. I felt peace as i did read your lines. Love within a flowing river of words. This one has to be a fave Charlie. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 7/10/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike...
Date: 6/21/2018 12:14:00 PM
A fine lyric with good flow, Charlie, and thank you for reading my take on certain birds. One question sir: Who or what is "your light" in the last stanza of your poem? Again always a pleasure to hear from you. / M
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/22/2018 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Maurice, for me it would be spiritual in nature, for others it may simple be the love of another...
Date: 6/20/2018 11:31:00 PM
Charlie, these lyrics are magical and instantly inspire!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/21/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Lyric Man...
Date: 6/19/2018 4:37:00 PM
what a beautifully uplifting lyric Charlie, thanks for sharing this gem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/20/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Jan...
Date: 6/17/2018 11:16:00 AM
Charlie, you have excellently illuminated the depth, power and beauty of love in this wonderfully written lyric! Thoroughly enjoyed the read! Hugs. Pandita
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/19/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Pandita...
Date: 6/13/2018 10:41:00 AM
Oh love the positivity, Charlie. wonderful poetry...
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Harry...
Date: 6/12/2018 8:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Charlie. Love, peace and hope. Who could wish for more?
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Date: 6/12/2018 6:49:00 PM
Sing to my soul your peaceful tune.. a sound so lovely and free!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Chance...
Date: 6/12/2018 3:37:00 PM
so uplifting in its natural sway, charles... greeat job!..huggs
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Nette...
Date: 6/12/2018 10:40:00 AM
I can feel the tenderness in this one. A real joy to read.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/12/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite...
Date: 6/11/2018 7:00:00 PM
Really really nice...Well written my friend...An enjoyable read to the end...All the best Charlie
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/12/2018 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Arturo...
Date: 6/11/2018 6:17:00 PM
Beautifully written Charlie. I love it. A favorite. Thanks for sharing :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/12/2018 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Heidi...
Date: 6/11/2018 5:46:00 PM
Such beloved words Charlie..you wrote a charming lyric..enjoyed reading it.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/12/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...
Date: 6/11/2018 4:39:00 PM
So many what ifs in life Charlie, missed opportunities for some. A great lyric, I've sort of sung it several times now, unfortunately, I'm not a musician for this most definitely needs a tune! Mick
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/12/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Mick...
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