A LOVE THAT KNOWS NO END

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A LOVE THAT KNOWS NO END
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Your laughter dances
like fireflies caught in the dusk,
illuminating the spaces
between our breaths,
and I am drawn to you,
like the moon to the tide,
pulling me closer.

Time bends around us,
as we dance in the spaces between words,
where every heartbeat echoes
the rhythm of forever,
an unspoken vow,
a love that knows no end.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/17/2025 4:14:00 PM

So lovely, poetry and the photograph… Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/17/2025 5:25:00 PM

awww, many thanks, Beryl. Appreciate your visit today, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/17/2025 2:15:00 PM

What a charming thought, and the image speaks so sweetly as well. A description, simple yet profound, of the image unfolds, bringing forth a sense of comfort and loveliness that lingers in the heart. Exquisite. Wishing you both abundant blessings. In the embrace of one another. In whispers, you’ve unearthed the hidden bond. Beautiful verses!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/17/2025 5:26:00 PM

thanks, dear Sotto, for your kind words about both the poem and the image. Grateful for your blessings and your complimentary words about the poem. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/17/2025 1:19:00 PM

Very lovely poem! True love is the sweetest!! Best wishes :-)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/17/2025 5:26:00 PM

thank you ever so much, AA.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/17/2025 12:23:00 PM

Wow!! Superb. Blessings to you both. The world in each others arms. You have found the secret together. Gorgeous poetry!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/17/2025 5:27:00 PM

thank you for your enthusiastic and kind words. I'm grateful you found this poem gorgeous...means a lot to me. Have a blessed evening, Sara

Riley Ryleigh

Date: 8/17/2025 11:54:00 AM

Beautifully written love poem Sara! I like the lines "and I am drawn to you, like the moon to the tide".

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/17/2025 5:24:00 PM

thanks for visiting, Riley, and for your sweet comments. Color me grateful, hugs, Sara