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A Love Tested and Tried

Its my life so i decide, That you'll be forever on my side I know Im gonna be a happy bride For our Love, is my joy & pride. my happiness i cannot hide I have a family who support & guide. Until your loyalty had been tested and tried what you have done i cannot described How long did you hide The anger you build inside I thought you just want to divide The things i was gladly provide Turns out your just envy inside All the bitterness in your heart collide Just wish u just put the hate aside Considered everything in good side The people i love, You spied. And Spread bad rumors so wide Suddenly your not on my side I am shock at your betrayal and pride How can u be so mean to me and lied You took everything from me, even my pride The only thing i can do is sigh and cried Dont you know you broke me till i almost died.?

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Date: 5/25/2025 5:35:00 AM
Hey newbie, welcome to PS! Best way to get known is to get around, visit others' poetry. Congrats on placement
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Joyce Bautista
Date: 5/28/2025 9:33:00 AM
Thanks sir tom. Will surely visit your site :)
Date: 5/24/2025 7:08:00 AM
Wonderful engaging winning write! Congratulations and you said you are a newbie? Welcome to soup!
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Joyce Bautista
Date: 5/24/2025 12:28:00 PM
Thank you mam karen. :)
Date: 5/23/2025 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement on your winning work!!! Your poem captures a part of the dark side of life. Congratulations on your winning work!!!
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Joyce Bautista
Date: 5/24/2025 12:27:00 PM
Thankyou sir micheal for appreciating my work. Looking forward to your next contest
Date: 5/22/2025 9:28:00 AM
Hello. Please take time to read my poem. I hope you guys will appreciate it. I am a newbie"
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