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A Love Song

Oh my Love! The throb and thrill of my life! Why remain so elusive like will-o’- the- wisp? Why vanish quickly like a delightful dream Why fade out like a symphony sweet? Won’t you come to me to ease my pain To herald for me a new dawn To transport me to worlds intangible To be ever with me as my guardian angel Hold my hand when I am about to fall Help me set new goals when I am lost Make me laugh when I am low Infuse courage when I develop cold feet Show me dew drops that I can see diamonds Feed me with home fare that I may taste Ambrosia Gift me a rose that a thousand blooms instantly burst open Talk high of me that rainbows may arch around my sky Why take your glance off, if you do so, I will wither like a flower If you show a cold shoulder, I am sure to grow frozen inside If you speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear If you turn your back, my heart will break into shards Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths, Like two streams that flow and merge as one, And travel miles to run down to the sea Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and anon! Placed Third 10, December 2021 My Significant 2021 Poem Poetry Contest Sponsor- Beta Agustin

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Date: 2/12/2022 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Valsa. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 1/28/2022 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "A Love Song," is a wonderful/romantic write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day............
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Date: 1/25/2022 9:55:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing your heart through this dramatic monologue of yours earnestly expressed in your excellent poetic style. Indeed, thanks for your participation. God bless you.
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Date: 1/2/2022 9:01:00 PM
Wow! great story! Romantic and steamy! Enjoyed ~ Debra
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Valsa George
Date: 1/3/2022 8:01:00 AM
Debra, I see that I have commented on all your poems. So can only thank you for your lovely response. Your attitude is so much appreciated, sweet one !
Date: 1/2/2022 5:12:00 PM
Passion and imagery in this elegant piece. Enjoyed! All the best :) ~ps
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Valsa George
Date: 1/3/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much P. S. Thanks for your kind read and comment !
Date: 1/2/2022 10:51:00 AM
wow, VERY significant AND romantic. Love your imagery!! Ok, here is how to see contest results: Go to results page and right above the list, to the left, you will see a box with the year 2022 in it. Just click underneath it and go to 2121. You can explore the winners of ALL the past contest years this way!!
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Valsa George
Date: 1/2/2022 7:57:00 PM
You are very kind.... ! Thanks a lot Andrea for patiently explaining to me. Before I got your detailed instruction, through 'trial and error' method, I had found out.... but wasted a lot of my time.
Date: 1/2/2022 10:44:00 AM
Reads like a Bollywood script and the captcha code is "APE" so I do hope he is out there! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
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Valsa George
Date: 1/3/2022 8:04:00 AM
Like a Bollywood script...!! Whoo ...Thank you so much Rico :) :)
Date: 1/2/2022 7:16:00 AM
What splendid imagery. The longing and yearning for a love that vanished. This, my dear friend is poetry at its best, not often encountered on the soup.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/3/2022 8:06:00 AM
You have made my day dear Victor ! Thank you soooo much !
Date: 1/2/2022 6:25:00 AM
A poem of longing and love--your verses invoke diamonds in dew drops and rainbow of love in skies. Heartfelt, delightfully executed, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/3/2022 8:10:00 AM
Can a cat become a tiger, though both belong to the same family! But making a humble attempt ! Thanks a lot dear friend !

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