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A Love Resealed (Poem To the Painting "automat")

Sadness has come to steal The moment that time has to reveal; Until life becomes gradually futile With depression that creates a nil. Words have made one to feel The love that has long been sealed, But the risk has brought an ill Response that almost killed… Oh, heart that made love to spill Over a gift from uphill; Mistakes that never dominate what’s real, Yet dilemma has allowed this to happen still. Perchance hope never will Give chance to a dying steel; What fate could it ever deal? Nothing but sorrow for the love resealed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/23/2016 10:03:00 PM
Paul, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 5:59:00 PM
Paul, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Paul Michael, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this wonderful poem It's easy to see why you did so well. The painting was inspiring. Your creativity shines. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/23/2009 2:11:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on your fourth place finish in Brian's contest. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2009 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Imagine contest!
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brians contest with this beautifully written piece! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/18/2009 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful entry to Brian's contest! Well done!~ Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2009 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 1:24:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Paul.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open.
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:19:00 AM
Good luck in the competition. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2009 2:17:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Paul.rgds Brian
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:22:00 AM
Paul, I wish you the best should you enter the contest. Thank you for sharing your writing today. Love, Carol
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