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A Love I Can'T Forget (From a Man's Perspective)

Her foreign ways of doing little things Surround my memory and dreams Her mouth - a poem in itself and grace without compare I walk in rain under that window I hear her voice calling my name - a song of crystals in the wind but shattered as I wake... Her figure walks in front of me I can't believe and run... A dark mirage with other woman's eyes Gives chills along my spine... Her foreign ways of showing love Would melt the toughest man She taught me how to laugh and cry With tears of joy and sorrow... * . It's winter now and I am gray The house is cold and empty The fire logs recall my past And every flame sparkle a song About a love I can't forget... www.scripca.com http://www.gustavcaillebotte.org/A-Young-Man-At-His-Window.html

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Iolanda. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations Iolanda, on this amazing man's point of view poetry, being featured on the Soup! I don't remember reading this one, but glad I didn't miss it! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:54:00 AM
Iolanda, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:56:00 AM
I like to write various artists into my poetry too. Hope I've read you right. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 9/21/2010 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on the Soup, this week, Iolanda. Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Picture This" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 9:01:00 PM
Beautiful writing from you, Iolanda. this must be one I had missed. COngratulations!!!
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:30:00 PM
Congrats Iolanda on your HM in Brian's contest with this wonderful poem and inspirational print.. appreciate the website reference too.. enjoy your special honor.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/3/2010 9:05:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Iolanda.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/19/2010 11:58:00 PM
Nice work here Iolanda.Thank you for your welcome comments on my poetry today .Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:42:00 AM
tHIS I ENJOYED. p.d.
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