A LOVE BORN - DUSK TO DAWN

APRIL NATIONAL POETRY  MONTH CONTEST
BEST LOVE OR  INTIMACY  POEM

Apprehensively, I stepped into a crowded
Wedding reception of a distant relative,
That is when I saw you from afar,
Instantly, my mood changed from apprehensive,
To desire, a woman born magicly for me!


Your flawless skin
Suntanned and glowing,
Your long red hair
 Fiery and flowing,
Your presence melted 
Throughout my being,
Your flighty flirty silky voice
Above the music and the noise,
Was like an angel’s harp,
A cupid’s arrow,
Aimed straight at my heart.
My breathing shallow,
With a saucy look,
You threw your head back,
Flicked your hair,
Was this a dare,
I drowned in your gaze,
You turned my way,
As if to say yes, you may.
The floor began to slide,
Quickening my pulse,
My senses not so steady,
I felt quite heady,
Your sensuality electric,
It was incredible,
I could almost taste your lips, 
So cherry red, so edible,
As I savored you, but
No more could I take.
I walked across the room
 And swung you in my arms,
Your titillating laugh,  
And long slender legs, 
Told secretly of 
Other Hidden charms.
I took you home,
The wind was wild, 
Your red hair slapped my face,
You held my arm so tight,
With excitement yet with
Poise and grace.
On the way, not a word
Did you speak, your wide, 
Hazel brown eyes said all.
We fell in love that night,
And knew each other well,
By first light.

I cradled you murmuring
I will love you till I die,
She took a strand of her long
Red hair, encircling
Our wedding fingers.

Competition Entry: APRIL NATIONAL POETRY MONTH POETRY CONCERT
SPONSOR: Daniel  Henry Rogers
Date: 07/04/2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Neumann Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 1:57 AM
I remember that wedding. Today the divorce feels like a funeral. And yet today I feel for the first time, that everything is for the best. Kind wishes, Kai
George Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 7:44 PM
Greatly enjoyed your highly romantic poem, how he subdued you with his very first appearance and how instant has been your slipping into his charm. Wonderful flow and sensuous detailing.
Bayles Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 7:36 PM
So descriptive and filled with emotion.
Loving Iii Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 12:20 PM
where wishes come true.
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 12:04 AM
Wow. Very sensual writing, Jennifer. Ooh la la
Godwin Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 1:34 PM
THANK YOU for letting me know you're here/back. Tell me all is golden in your world, that your absence was due to a 'happy busy.' Your poem - does your husband know you're gay? I'm kidding, I've never written from a man's pov, never even thought of it. These lines especially rocked me, 'Your presence melted Throughout my being' - I could feel it. This displays your talent throughout with impressive imagery, flow and detail. This delivers. Good to spend time with you!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 12:52 PM
Whew and ooh la la! A whirlwind romance, passionate and beautiful!
Poet Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 9:07 AM
So beautifully crafted, rich with layers of metaphor that dance and intertwine. This brings me a sense of happiness, so tender to the tactile sensation. In that fleeting moment, a spark ignites, a fervor awakens. Beautifully crafted, Jennifer. Wishing you all the best.
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 5:14 AM
Romantic lines penned. Very descriptive work. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 1:24 AM
Seems St Valentine's Day is approaching. Very romantic poem.
May Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 6:29 AM
Love at first sight, which ignites a passion, Very nicely penned Jennifer, best wishes
Cunningham Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 12:28 AM
Very romantic verse Jennifer, wishing you many more happy years together. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 1:28 PM
Hello Jennifer, Hi! I enjoyed this poem. A beautiful olve poem in poetry. Hugs. /Darlene/
Edmonds  Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 12:00 PM
A beautiful love story/poem Jennifer, a wonderful read… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 11:52 AM
WOW!!! What a write/story you have here. I enjoyed reading. You painted a picture with your words. I did Not get your soup mail. Have a fun day writing away.............
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