A Lost Kid In the City

I'm not in love
So why do I feel so hurt?
I am still a kid
So why do I see things that I shouldn't?
I'm not an adult
So why do I feel like one?

Lights on the streets outshines the stars tonight
I am imagining a non existent melody inside
I feel so dejected
So why do I feel like I'm in a magical rainbows?
It's not raining tonight
So why does my face feels so wet?

I am still wandering
I am still alone and lonely
Don't know what to do
Suddenly I wanted to see someone
But what do I do?
I don't even know who I should meet

I am not looking for someone
But I woke up in the morning
Still feeling the cold on my feet
I had this unknown feelings
Yesterday's memories are fading but it is still in my mind

I am still waiting for miracles to happen
Because I'm still a kid
I am still yearning to live in a magical world
But what I had is not in my dreams
And I am just a lost kid in a city

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/5/2015 12:40:00 PM
Fatin, Congratulations :) On your wonderful Honorable Mention. ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:40:00 AM
Congrats once again on this wonderful win Fatin!
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 9/4/2015 8:42:00 AM
Hi thank you very much for that :)
Date: 9/3/2015 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win and a 7! This is such a brilliantly written piece! We have far too many children who are lost and abandoned. Your heartfelt write touched my heart and it is such a tragedy that there are children who have no one to care for them. Have a great day! Pandita
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 9/4/2015 8:42:00 AM
Thanks for that. Really appreciate it :)
Date: 9/2/2015 10:48:00 PM
Congrats Fatin for a deserved big win with this very precisely thoughtful write!
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 9/18/2015 7:26:00 AM
Hi! thanks for that!
Date: 9/2/2015 5:55:00 PM
Fatin, Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 9/4/2015 8:41:00 AM
Hi :) Thanks for that SKAT
Date: 9/2/2015 4:01:00 PM
beautiful but sad congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 9/4/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thanks for that :)
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