A Lost Art

How rare, how innate this journey 
manifests to be, the foreshadowing 
of a loners blessing. 

That intuitive thought to travel 
with when my third eye seems blemished. 
A mannequin of myself hidden in 
longevity, that has yet to spoil. 

I sometimes allow thoughts to slip 
away from this safe haven,
thereby welcoming consequences,
consequences only an amateur 
would allow. 

In this game of similar links,
I’m quickly reminded of a presence 
bestowed upon me. 
Those allies illustrated for battle.

Only a true soldier could retrace these 
portraits, heavy pages of uncertainty that we failed 
to erase. I’m grateful however, of the genuine flame it 
ignited. 

We defeated the irrelevant 
hazing, and found the blueprint for 
camaraderie. 
A groundwork for future war scars discovered
in our spirit. Overtime we prayed, and
received that undaunted 
scent. 

Still, perhaps in this physical scene, 
There lies too much symmetry for this 
parallel vision. 
Some fade away as a result, 
anticipating a reunion in higher 
dimensions. 

But as this masterpiece continues to illuminate, 
I praise God for this muse called friendship.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Goff Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 6:02 AM
Wonderful poem Jiril!
Breidenthal Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 6:55 PM
Wonderful poem! :) Thanks for checking out my poem from 2013. You are a talented bard. Very fascinating and intriguing. Thanks for sharing.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 8:13 AM
The lost art I was referring to is the art of writing poetry. It seems to have lost favour with a large part of the general public. As for the returning to our shores portion, I have no clue what I was thinking when I wrote that *lol*
Lamoureux Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 8:31 PM
A lost art indeed. Still there are those who cultivate it and bless themselves and the world in the process. Top shelf poetry. Let me know when you return to our shores.
Clemons Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 7:15 AM
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Fleming Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 2:15 AM
A fortifying poem, Jiril...has strong qualities that are both thankful and hopeful all working together at the same time - very good! Enjoyed the read, Jiril. My best regards. :) john
Clemons Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Thank you John. Appreciate the love.
Kimathi Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:25 PM
I love the rich imagery and expression you've used, guiding us to the narrator's thoughts.... A very fine piece! :-)
Clemons Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Thanks Teddy. Appreciate the love.
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