Joe Maverick Poet Rhyme

A losers reflection'

In the world of control..The scheme goes like
This..theres always a 'HIGHLIGHT' on what 
You might miss? What might be taken.? What
You can save.? In 2020 the theme was really
Hard played.' You might loose your life? Or
Your standing with friends.' It was first to the
Lifeboats ' Do you remember 'the trends?' 
What might you loose? Well some took a
Chance.' First we lost all the shallow folk yet
Others stood fast.' We lost out on the loans
That must be paid back.' On the various poisons, yet have no sense of a lack.' We lost
Fear of some un-known; and invisible things?
Some accepted Jesus, and lost all the old sin,
Death got lost also.' And looking around! Considering  all
Of the loosing, I'm amazed at what was found.!!

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Valsa George August 25, 2025 at 10:42 PM Many live in fear of the unknown and of invisible things. But if we put our trust in Jesus Christ who relieved us of our sins, we shall get enough to live on and we will be able to find more than we lose. Well expressed, dear Joe Joe Maverick August 26, 2025 at 3:52 AM Yes good riddance to negative Things ideas and ways of Living.' Well responded dear Valsa

James Peranteau August 21, 2025 at 8:00 AM Matthew 6:33 ') Joe Maverick August 21, 2025 at 2:05 PM Hello James old friend God bless your comment Nothing can be added or taken so it says.' Thank you For time spent..Out of your day.'

Joseph P. DiMino August 21, 2025 at 4:11 AM Absolutely! Empty your vessel, wipe it out with prayer and obedience to law, and Christ will quench all future thirst. Great write, Joe! Thank you. Joe Maverick August 21, 2025 at 5:43 AM Great of you to stop by Joe Dimino, considered words as I always expect from you;thanks.'

Bill Baker August 20, 2025 at 10:24 PM Because of Him, in my life, old things have passed away and all things have become new. Thanks for sharing these fine thoughts with us through your poetry, Joe. Write On! my friend. Bill Joe Maverick August 21, 2025 at 5:41 AM Thank you Bill for your time and kind words.'

sara Etgen-Baker August 20, 2025 at 4:49 PM definitely too much focus on losing and not enough. In so doing, that becomes a reality. The endless fear of the unknown seems pervasive. What happened to faith and the belief that God will provide enough???? Joe Maverick August 20, 2025 at 10:00 PM Its always there in different Generations Sara I suppose We as humans are prone to Doubt that allows the process To begin.' Yet all is to be lost Of the world from our birth.. Which points me to what has Eternal gain.' God alone.)