A Long-Needed Vacation

a long-needed vacation I'll take
or romantic getaway on school brake. 
maybe to a   casino where I can rake
spin the wheel and a fortune I'll make
or blow and give the dice a shake

maybe I'll go fishing on a lake,
a piece of land with gold I'll stake 
with a nesting duck and a drake.


2/3/2022

inspired by L MILTON HANKINS blog
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Proxenos Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 12:57 AM
Well it sounds like a holiday of adventure you are about to have . Then when you come back you can poetically describe your holiday, Enjoy Eve my friend . Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Daniel Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:55 PM
Nice little monorhyme, Eve:)
Theraven Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 8:25 AM
Eve, A vacation with a toss of the dice in romance. Many lives started down the path just this way. -Richard
Buhagiar Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Brilliant monorhyme. HUgs.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 2:00 AM
Lovely monorhyme Eve!
George Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Lovely.... great flow and rhythm ! Well done Eve
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