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A Long, Long Time Ago On a Cold Winter's Night

A long, long time ago on a cold winter's night A long, long time ago on a cold winter’s night Two hearts were broken the crest of the eve This is the story of how it all happened How friendship will conquer if you just believe ~~~~~~~~ Soft are the wings of the firefly princess Twilight the scene of her flickering light Pine needle whispers aflutter of springtime Alone on this evening in silence her flight Warm April breezes caressing her body Slumbering daffodils, gold leaf embossed Shining, her beacon illumines the valley Twinkling sad of a friend she had lost Wandering sadly neath evergreen niches Shadows and silhouettes bend at her glow Hard to imagine her tiny heart broken Far from the beauty this night she does show When then she sees him alone on a hillside A pen in his hand as he quietly writes Silently floating, she lands on his shoulder Kind is his face that her glow gently lights Noticing teardrops upon his cheeks falling “Why are you crying?” she asks him sincere Startled, he looks at her, eyes wet and weary “Oh little firefly, what has brought you here?” He turned away gazing off up at the moonlight Then shook his head as more words he wrote down “I miss her so much,” he said in a whisper His mouth once he finished returned to a frown She knew how he felt for her heart it was broken One winter’s evening, a cold misty day Taken from sleep by her jealous big sister Evil her magic had whisked him away Just then she noticed that things felt familiar Something about him jarred her memory It can not be, visions rambled within her This can not be my friend taken from me “If I may ask sir, please when did you lose her?” She fluttered her wings so excited to hear Her light now as bright as the full moon above them Here on this hillside the skies ever clear “It’s hard to remember, but sometime last winter, a sorceress came on the solstice I think From by her side I was suddenly taken, found myself here just as quick as a wink” “Since then I’ve cried on this hillside we frolicked Writing her poetry, words how I feel Sorrow and sadness in harmonic phrases Verses my broken heart could not conceal” “The saddest part is it is merely a feeling, only her smile is what I can recall I know she was real for my heart does remind me, the rest is a blur, almost nothing at all” She thought and she thought of her wicked old sibling Remembering tears drops from friendships that fell When mixed together might change what had happened Glistening together, they could break the spell She took one of hers that she saved since December Flew to his cheek were a steady stream flowed Placed her own teardrop within his now weeping To her amazement, his body it glowed Shimmering sparkles like fireworks bursting A magical sheen filled the heavens above A blink of her eye and he changed right before her He now was a firefly, the one that she loved His eyes grew as wide as a sunflower smiling Flapping his wings like he’d never before Looking at her, his light brightly was gleaming He said, “I remember, you’re my friend I adore” He was so happy, he flew up and hugged her “I missed you,” he said “never leave me again We’ll fly and we’ll hide far away from your sister” Then he looked down and he noticed his pen He lifted it up and then flew to the paper Flapping his wings he penned one final line It read that they lived happily ever after From now in this moment, till the end of time ~~~~~~ So there you have it, a tale of best friends Missing each other once taken apart Knowing now that every happiest ending Can always be found if you look in your heart
2/13/17 Written for the Fairy Tale for Children Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 2/16/2018 10:47:00 AM
I'm reading some of my faves this morning. Oh, how I miss your poems. You are a master of lovely lines.
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Date: 3/14/2017 8:21:00 AM
Wonderful story Chris...Congrats on a great win
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Date: 3/14/2017 1:51:00 AM
Congratulations Chris, I love the story and the enchanting language in your win.
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:22:00 PM
Magical Chris, congratulations, so well deserved...
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations Chris!! Well done my friend!! Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/13/2017 6:50:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Chris, I want to thank you for entering my contest. I fell in love with this romantic story. Brilliant .. Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 3/13/2017 8:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve. I am humbled to have placed so high in your contest. I am honored you liked this one so much.
Date: 2/17/2017 3:08:00 PM
I loved this poem i really enjoyed it.II enjoyed this rhyme.Love andhugs.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/17/2017 3:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene for your kind words
Date: 2/15/2017 8:36:00 PM
Oh wow, this is superb, Chris! Such a charming fairy tale that flows so easily. I imagine it would be easily read out loud to children. I'm going to print it out for my younger son and the little girls who live next door to me. I'm sure I'll see this at the top of the winner's list and a belated congrats on TPOD!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thanks so very much Rhonda for your kind thoughts.
Date: 2/15/2017 3:01:00 AM
- Congratulations, Chris :) - A super poem .... luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/15/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Date: 2/14/2017 8:56:00 PM
There should be a rating of more than 7 for this one. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Good luck in the contest...not that you need it! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/15/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you again Carole for always leaving such nice comments for me.
Date: 2/14/2017 1:27:00 PM
I agree w/Winged Warrior. A super job, Chris. Kudos for POTD. I'd read this fairy tale to all my young nieces and nephews. Great write. Love and peace.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 1:41:00 PM
Thanks a bunch Freddie. I am thrilled you enjoyed this fairy tale. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 2/14/2017 1:19:00 PM
Superbly done Chris...Congrats!!!...(((WOW)))...POTD...great story...god bless...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness always.
Date: 2/14/2017 9:00:00 AM
Hey my friend! Poem of the Day! How wonderful, congratulations :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 2/14/2017 7:08:00 AM
This has to be one of the most magical beautiful fairy tale story. Lightly sad but ending with a happily ever! Definitely a fave. I love it! Congratulations Chris, outstanding piece of the day :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 8:16:00 AM
Aw, thank you so much Akkina for your wonderful thoughts about my poem this morning. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/14/2017 6:43:00 AM
It was a joy to begin my day with your beautiful fairly tale, Chris. Congrats on POTD.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much Agnes. I am happy this poem brought a nice start to your day
Date: 2/13/2017 4:01:00 PM
I'm not an learned poet, but I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I have read. Definitely a fav and a 7. I love many lines, but this one struck me. "Placed her own teardrop within his now weeping."
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 4:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Sunlite, that makes two of us. I just start writing and hope something good comes out. :) I appreciate your visits my friend.
Date: 2/13/2017 2:46:00 PM
Oh, Chris, what a wonderful, magical tale you wrote. It's been a long time since I read a children's story and now I'm wondering why I waited. You had me smiling, hoping for a happy reunion. Your two characters are so alive they jump off the page. Simply amazing! You won't need luck to win this contest. Quality speaks for itself and you have quite the talent for this type of write. Thank you for sharing. Hugs for you!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much Carolyn for your always kind words to me. I appreciate your visits to my poetry.
Date: 2/13/2017 1:43:00 PM
That's a read and a half Chris, Wonderful :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 2:55:00 PM
Thanks so very much Gary.
Date: 2/13/2017 12:17:00 PM
This makes me cry in a good way, what a wonderful tale! To be reunited like that. That means so much more to me than I can tell here. And that rhyme and cadence flows my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 2:54:00 PM
Happy tears are the best tear there are. Thanks so very much Darren.
Date: 2/13/2017 12:10:00 PM
How beautiful this is...as so true friendship..A treasure once found...This is a winner in my heart..A fave...
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend for always being so nice to me.
Date: 2/13/2017 11:29:00 AM
A very lovely tale indeed! 7
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Kim for your kind thoughts
Date: 2/13/2017 11:18:00 AM
So beautiful and sweet Chris. I love the Sunflower smiling! Good luck in the contest. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thanks so very much Heidi. I appreciate your kindness.

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