A Long Long Time Ago

A long long time ago, actually it was much further back than that
No one really knows the date as it's become just a human stat

Somewhere out there, the universe was set alive
And it's taken millions of years to realise it's not our prize

It's so hard to get your head around, the events on that day
Where science as we know it, raised it's head to say

From the particle dust, as it swirls in past eons of time
Planets that we have come to know, or we'll discover as our space age climbs

They said we would never find water, on the Moon or the planet Mars
Deep inside our sleeping satellite, behind those lunar scars

Only a few years back, we impeded on it's crater scarred scape
And followed up with a probe, and the readings we can now relate

To leave our planet earth, rocket propulsion desires water
It's part of mans science mix, to the universe and her daughters

What we have discovered is not much, it could be enough for our very next step
If we actually agree to behave ourselves, the very next step is not so inept

A long long time ago, actually it was much further back than that
All that us humans dream, will become our histories stats
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:58 PM
wonderful insightful piece, much enjoyed, thank you for your kind comments on my work James , have a beautiful week ahead of you
Ruebel Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:39 AM
James, Wonderful write, what a wake up call. As always Shar Thank you for your kind words........
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Very enlightening thoughts on the universe, James
Magofna Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 12:20 AM
what an extraordinary piece of work...i admire the way you combine poetry and facts...
Devonshire Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 6:37 PM
You've been doing some deep thinking about the origins of the universe and man's potential for exploration, James. Our knowledge of space science seems to be growing at a very slow rate, but I do think our "next step" will be a visit to Mars. Enjoyed this poem very much! Love, Carolyn
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