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A Long Long Love

Been a long long time since we made somethin of love, Been a long long time since I had your poetic kiss the one I miss on these lonely lips, Been a long long wait after work and war my heart sore, Been a long long wait lookin for your lovely gait, Been a long long need knowin that your wings aren't heavy with hurt, Been a long long need havin your sweet comfort, Been a long long dream holdin your hair in my hands Been a long long dream feelin your breaths in my arms, Been a long long time since we made somethin of love, Been a long long time since we first fell in love - J.A.B.

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Leon Enriquez

Date: 11/1/2017 10:09:00 AM

Justin: Nicely done. Leon

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/13/2018 1:22:00 PM

Thank you...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/26/2017 8:57:00 PM

"knowin that your wings aren't heavy with hurt"...Love is such a topic that so many poets can flourish on. Through expression and influences of longing, of affection and to gain a new insight...sometimes to express a heartache defying description. This was a dear one, Justin, simple in language, yet profound and poignant all the same. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/28/2017 6:30:00 PM

Yes Poetess, on one wing, love can bring us closer to ourselves like a poem to a poet, and on the other wing love will propell us to make the heart and majestic flight of another just as important as ourselves. I composed this poem to be lyrical, beautiful, and naturally rhythmical.I love your understanding of this special poem Laura...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/9/2017 8:51:00 PM

This is an amazing piece, Justin. Such beautiful words...such heartfelt need. Your poetry is always perfect in promise. Lovely write.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/11/2017 12:19:00 AM

I find pleasure in the promise of honest hearts Eileen...a heart's song always makes perfect poetry...J.A.B.