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A Long Hairline Crack

A long hairline crack down the side Can't be seen from entrance at door It leaks just a small drip not tide But tends to puddle on the floor Will try to patch by using caulk Let it dry then see if it works With this repair should have good block Maybe not even watermarks All that work you have guessed, it leaks Still..maybe have to replace it Can't just throw this away..antiques Know what I can do get a kit In the yard it will get to sit During its final days it will Float jasmine scent to our credit The end for commode that's unreal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/14/2010 8:21:00 AM
It matters not to where nature grows, because she will be in her splendour in green and colourful throws >> James
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Date: 3/10/2010 3:27:00 PM
A great read, I find it cute. Enjoyed the read. Thank u 4 your comment today...I.T.
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Date: 3/10/2010 12:14:00 PM
smiled at the end (commode)...u devil u :-)...a fun read albeit a tad bumpy... cheers P
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Date: 3/10/2010 11:57:00 AM
cute, did you see your neighbor's toilet? in the yard? looks like they glued flowers to it.
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Date: 3/10/2010 7:02:00 AM
Ahhhh some of our favorite things, actually move on to better places!!! Nicely written Sara! Thanks for your kind comments! I really enjoyed this longer piece! Jeralynn
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Date: 3/10/2010 5:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Sara. You have made my day now I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 9:30:00 PM
Good use you put it to, Sara. a fun read . About my limericks. I just use "names" the names do not refer to an actual person. So all my limerics, though they use my friends' names, are just to make jokes about anybody with that name and not one person in particular! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/9/2010 7:41:00 PM
and i see, i read your mail.sorry for the comment. ah ha. and on my poem "Black Crystal", its apart of "mysteries of hate" i can't continue the story until i have more dreams.Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/9/2010 7:36:00 PM
Sweet last line .. so funny ... never would have guessed a commode.. so its a flower garden too.. never would have thought of that.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. need more of these funny writes on Soup... good job Sara..
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Date: 3/9/2010 4:49:00 PM
Sorry for that! Did you try any time a clear strong glue? Thank you for your comments, Sara! I for sure blew all yoke an white of the eggs off and kept sem packed. I believe best would be to fill the empty eggs with gypsum so that the can' break. ...Gert
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Date: 3/9/2010 4:43:00 PM
You made this so funny. I hope it was a pink toilet. We have one in the powder room that we are very fond of. I use nail polish to hide the flaws. It's so unusual, we'd never remodel it, but now I am afraid it will crack. Your imagination is unrivaled. Thanks
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Date: 3/9/2010 4:12:00 PM
Saw a commode in a neighbor's yard being used to house flowers..Sara
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