A Long Good Night

Dear mother too-long-gone.
One year,
second year of motherless
mother’s days. Never
thought you’d be the first
to go, over many who
seemed more likely,
but I’m not God. He knew.
He knew…we all die.
I thought I knew,
until you did.
The emptiness is complete.
Christ hung on that tree.
He knew
how bad separation
from a mother, from His Father
was. Too-long-gone,
come, Lord Jesus, come
reunite…
it’s been a long good night.

5/3/2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 1:36 AM
You have my thoughts and prayers my friend; being motherless is new for me too, it is an awful feeling.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 11:29 AM
It is so strange…tears. Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 3:17 AM
I know the feeling well. My wife dead five years ago. Sometimes I wish I were dead too. Lovely poignant poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 11:29 AM
My dad oft feels like that but I’m glad he is here. <3
Baker Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 1:38 PM
I'm with you, Kim, I'm ready. :-) but only God knows when. Blessings, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 2:22 PM
And we trust him…amen!
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