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A Lonely Recluse

Fearing The busy world And billions of people The young man afraid to start life Scared that he will never be accepted For things, he doesn't understand Ashamed he hides away Destined to be Recluse 6/27/2017
Created for: Form R - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 7/17/2017 4:27:00 PM
Oh, I just saw another poet who did rictameter. so yours is the second I have read. Great win for you, Jeremy. Big congratulations.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/17/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea:) Rictameters are fun to do !!
Date: 6/27/2017 9:01:00 PM
This is very powerful, and sad.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/27/2017 9:05:00 PM
Yes, a sad lonely life he led :(
Date: 6/27/2017 6:04:00 PM
The shape and content all wonderful, Jeremy! Best of luck on this one, my friend!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/27/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thanks, I need all the luck I can get!!

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