Jeremy Smith Poet Rictameter

A Lonely Recluse

Fearing
The busy world
And billions of people
The young man afraid to start life
Scared that he will never be accepted
For things, he doesn't understand
Ashamed he hides away
Destined to be
Recluse

6/27/2017

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Form R - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2017 at 4:27 PM Oh, I just saw another poet who did rictameter. so yours is the second I have read. Great win for you, Jeremy. Big congratulations. Jeremy Smith July 17, 2017 at 5:16 PM Thanks, Andrea:) Rictameters are fun to do !!

Poetically Numb June 27, 2017 at 9:01 PM This is very powerful, and sad. Jeremy Smith June 27, 2017 at 9:05 PM Yes, a sad lonely life he led :(

White Wolf June 27, 2017 at 6:04 PM The shape and content all wonderful, Jeremy! Best of luck on this one, my friend! Jeremy Smith June 27, 2017 at 6:06 PM Thanks, I need all the luck I can get!!