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This came to me afStock Photo - freshly dug grave. fotosearch - search stock photos, pictures, wall murals, images, and photo clipartter reading one of Janet Frame's poems..Sara
Bleak Sky, Dark gray, Charcoal drab, Like an old man's night, New widower beside the grave. Desolate, forlorn, now individual, unattached, Free, at liberty, unconnected, disconnected to life but still alive, pained
Contest:Tons Of Comma Fun Sponsor: Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/14/2012 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Tons Of Comma Fun" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2012 8:21:00 AM
I have never written a poem in the 'Fibonacci' style, but I may give it a try. Very nice job with this work and congratulations on your 4th place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:14:00 AM
DEAR SARA,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/11/2012 4:53:00 PM
A dark one, but so well written. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 2/11/2012 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Sara. Great comma placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:15:00 AM
Congrats, Sara. Awesome write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Thanks for your kind words. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/11/2012 3:31:00 AM
congrats Sara, love the deepness in this winner, take care, harry
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Date: 2/3/2012 8:41:00 PM
Wonderful Comma fun with a lovely picture, enjoyed and loved, bl
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Date: 2/2/2012 9:20:00 PM
Sara, this is very disconnected... you hung the emotions and feelings.. well.. good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 2/2/2012 1:46:00 PM
I've never read this F... named poem before but this was very moving. As we get older and older it becomes more and more important not to get stuck in the past, even when the future seems so short
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Date: 2/2/2012 1:37:00 PM
Yes, I agree with Russell - this one is awesome, Sara. This has to be a big winner - and many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 2/2/2012 1:31:00 PM
Wow Sara, this is one of your best writes you've ever written (and shown on the Soup)! This is a dark and dreary poem, shown in each line written! I really enjoyed the poem tons today! Keep 'em coming! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/2/2012 12:00:00 PM
A creative write by you Sara.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/2/2012 8:41:00 AM
deeply intense lines Sara and this is a wonderful poetry form .. luv the new widower beside the grave line.. such emotion .. hope u are well luv.. blessings too..
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Date: 2/2/2012 7:42:00 AM
So well expressed.
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Date: 2/2/2012 7:29:00 AM
An interesting and visually appealing piece...
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Date: 2/2/2012 6:59:00 AM
Hey Sara...its beautiful as all your poetry is... xoxo Patrick
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Date: 2/2/2012 6:57:00 AM
sad thoughts.....hope you are having a good day.
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