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A Lonely Moon A lonely crescent moon shines shyly from above and brings me dreams of love as distant crickets croon their soulful summer tune; ‘tis her I’m thinking of. She wanders ‘cross the sky in flowing moonbeam gown alone while looking down from heavens way up high. Yet still I wonder why you never see her frown for lonely as she seems her tender beauty beams. March 29, 2021 HexSonnetta

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/7/2021 4:47:00 AM

A delightful piece with vivid imagery, John:-) Nicely done! Congratulations on your win!

John Gondolf
Date: 4/7/2021 5:43:00 AM

Thanks, Edward, I'm glad you enjoyed like. John

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/6/2021 5:00:00 PM

Congrats on this winner. Very creative way to go. Sara

John Gondolf
Date: 4/7/2021 2:14:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, I appreciate it.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/5/2021 9:59:00 PM

Soft, soothing, seduction! Congrats on your win, John!

John Gondolf
Date: 4/6/2021 2:11:00 AM

Thanks so much, I appreciate it. John

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/5/2021 12:11:00 PM

I see why this is a winner! Love the contrasts! Congratulations!

John Gondolf
Date: 4/6/2021 2:01:00 AM

Thank you, Kim, I appreciate it. John

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/5/2021 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations coming your way as well, John. It's a beautiful HexSonnetta.

John Gondolf
Date: 4/6/2021 1:52:00 AM

Thank you, Jenna, I appreciate it. Hugs.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2021 4:27:00 AM

what a charming poem John many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf
Date: 4/5/2021 4:46:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jan, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John

Ken Allan Dronsfield

Date: 4/4/2021 2:33:00 PM

Hello John, Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem! Ken

John Gondolf
Date: 4/4/2021 3:35:00 PM

Thanks so much, Ken, I appreciate it. John

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/4/2021 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations John! Your charming poem placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest, well done my friend, Emile.

John Gondolf
Date: 4/4/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thanks, Emile, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/29/2021 9:04:00 PM

"You never see her frown" Oh my ! That is because "her tender beauty beams" Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is beautiful and dreamy, all at the same time. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 3/30/2021 2:58:00 AM

The moon’s smile is never upside down, we should all keep this same smile on our faces. Lately I have to remind myself of this. My best to you, Brandy. Hugs.

Ann Peck

Date: 3/29/2021 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and rhyme. I'll look at the moon differently now. :)

John Gondolf
Date: 3/30/2021 2:41:00 AM

The moon holds many secrets, she knows all that happens in the darkness of the night; oh the stories that she could tell. Thanks for your comments, Ann, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/29/2021 9:37:00 AM

Exceptional pen, John. Such lovely imagery and flow. Rhymes nicely, too. Good luck in the contest.

John Gondolf
Date: 3/30/2021 2:34:00 AM

Thanks, Milton, I appreciate it. John

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2021 6:38:00 AM

The moon and romance go hand in hand, you captured both well in your verse John. Wishing you and your family a very happy Easter. Tom

John Gondolf
Date: 3/30/2021 2:32:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Tom, I appreciate it. Stay well. John