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Lines of beauty and layers of devotion. Their very fast queries have come to demotion. Words that cannot be limited in any way. The evil has taken hold of my display. While others were piercing, some were kind. Most of them sounded like music to my mind. Both fair and unfair concepts could be found. However, the motion is now silent ground. The primary goal of life is not only to survive. But by doing so with enthusiasm and thrive. Worry does not rid the future of its sadness. Today is tiring, so look around for gladness. The wealth of life is heightened by gratitude. God's price is reflected in a thankful attitude. Written: July 12, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/16/2022 8:26:00 AM

Another beautiful and mindful sonnet. I loved it and FAVed it my friend. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2022 2:05:00 PM

- This was beautiful, Las ... "The primary goal of life is not only to survive" ... so true :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/13/2022 7:53:00 AM

How wonderful! Indeed we need to be grateful! God bless!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2022 7:45:00 AM

You have masterfully described what the essence and the meaning of a good life should be, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Congratulations. Blessings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/13/2022 6:29:00 AM

Powerful thoughts my friend. Words to live by: The primary goal of life is not only to survive. But by doing so with enthusiasm and thrive. Worry does not rid the future of its sadness. Today is tiring, so look around for gladness...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/13/2022 1:13:00 AM

I love the spiritual ideas in this sonnet, so well written. Our goal is to do good.. Marvellous sonnet.

Valsa George

Date: 7/12/2022 9:15:00 PM

"The primary goal of life is not only to survive. But by doing so with enthusiasm and thrive."..... ! Agree cent percent with you.... dear poet friend. There is no point in having a death in life existence. If we are living , live in joy and gratitude. A lovely poem with a beautiful message!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/12/2022 5:28:00 PM

I particularly liked your concluding couplet and certainly agree with its message, Lasaad. "Look around for gladness," my friend.

Ann Foster

Date: 7/12/2022 3:36:00 PM

so look around for gladness, I love this line. You have to look for it. Sometimes it is harder to find than the day before. In fact that is most days of late. But it is there. God bless you. this is a wonderful write. Ann

Michael Tor

Date: 7/12/2022 2:19:00 PM

Lasaad your effort is thought provoking and is with a Godly theme we should all abide in. Your talent is pronounced in this writing my friend. Very impressive as always. Your Poetry always is exceptional. You are very gifted writer. Thank you for posting...